Audition for Life

Monday, August 29, 2005

The Blue Wind
A one act radio play
By Sandra Bunting

Intro:

"..song is existence. Easy for the god. But when do we exist? And when does he spend the earth and the stars on our being? When we love? That's what you think when you are young; not so, though your voice forces open your mouth, -learn to forget how you sang. That fades. Real singing is a different kind of breath. A nothing breath. A ripple in the god. A wind."
-Rilke on the creative process in Sonnet to Orpheus

'There is nothing to which we can attach ourselves, no matter how hard we try.
In time, things will change and the conditions that produced our current desires
will be gone. Why then cling to them now?'
-Master Hsing Yun


The play alternates between two setting: the New York apartment to represent, human existence, and the night club called the Blue Wind to represent the more magical, or Fairyland.


Through the play I want to examine our attachment to things that are passed down from us from our ancestor and the debts of our ancestors that we end up paying for.

I want to explore the place of fairies or the equivalent in life today.

I want to include a fight for the artistic and spiritual soul.

I want to look at the relation between madness and creativity.

I want to add a comment on the destruction of the environment.

I want to find out what the blue wind represents in our lives-opportunity or
destructive element.


Characters:

Gerry Cooper has not said a sensible word for a year. Stubborn, a highly skilled carpenter and a jazz musician. Sometimes he jumps up and plays the sax. The story is vaguely reminiscent of Brian Wilson of the Beach Boys who went into a depression and wouldn't get out of bed for years. Gerry loves music. The fairy realm corresponds to his state of mind: depression or madness. He may be paying for the sins of his ancestors.

Kate Cooper is a bit of a psychic and felt that something bad was going to happen the night Gerry got ill but stubborn Gerry did not listen to her. She blames herself for not being more forceful in keeping him at home that night. It has been a hard year. Gerry is catatonic and needs looking after. She had a child during the year and must somehow support the three of them. A fighter, she would do anything to get him back.

Dan Rider is Gerry's best friend and jamming partner. He also blames himself for what happened to Gerry. He knew of the old stories and knew of the danger but wasn't strong enough to stop Gerry from falling in the trap. He has feelings for Kate but would never do anything to jeopardise his friendship with Gerry. He would accept being just a friend to Kate. Through his research in Ireland his belief has strengthened and he has become more and more attracted to the fairy way of life.

Giorsal, the Fairy Queen: She is the same physical build as a human. She is cunning and tricky but fair in a way. She forgets nothing. To her a deal is a deal no matter that it was agreed on generations before. She is aware that her world is changing and that the dividing lines between humans and her race are becoming hazier.

Rosalee: She only makes baby noises. Kate and Gerry's baby born while Gerry is catatonic. Still a very wee baby in cot. Later she is one year old.

Announcer: He has a lovely speaking voice and does the welcoming and introducing at the Blue Wing Club. He is also used on the radio near the end to announce Gerry's death.


SCENE ONE:


FADE UP JAZZ MUSIC. FADE UNDER SOUND OF CROW CAWING. CUT MUSIC.

Kate: (TO BABY) I'm glad I'm staying inside tonight. It's a wild one. Just listen to that rain.

SOUND OF RAIN AND CRACK OF THUNDER


Kate: How can you sleep through all of that? That's not a normal torm. Come here to me. I'll rock you and tell you a story your great- great grandmother used to tell.

SOUND OF BABY NOISES AND KATE HUMS A BIT.

Kate: It was a night like tonight. There was a big storm. Mist was so thick that you couldn't see a foot infront of you.

SOUND OF SOFT SAXOPHONE PLAYING

Kate: Archie Tulloch was on his way to play the fiddle at a dance. But the fairy folk captured him. They led him into an underground chamber and held him for a whole year to play music to the Queen. Diddilyi, diddilyi. diddilyi.

His friend saw where he went and was going to rescue him. But he had to wait a year for the same night...A full moon. A ring around it. And the blue wind.

Barriers between the two worlds were broken then and Archie was able to escape. He took with him the magic of music. But once he released it, he only had a short time to live.

(SIGHS) Your father loved that story. He used to tell it to me over and over before we went to sleep. That was when he still talked.

But you don't have to worry about those things. No one's going to take you. Here, down you go. You're nice and safe here.


SOUND OF HARD KNOCKING

Kate: (FROM INSIDE THE DOOR) Who is it?

Dan: (FROM OUTSIDE THE DOOR) Kate, It's Dan.


SOUND Of DOOR OPENING SOUND OF A COLD WIND. WIND SOUND CONTINUES UNTIL DOOR IS CLOSED.

Kate: Dan. Let me look at you. I thought you'd disappeared.

Dan: I'm back.

Kate: Well, come in .Oh look at that. That's the same as when Gerry was taken. The blue wind. Quick, inside.

SOUND OF DOOR CLOSING


Kate: I never expected to see you again.

Dan: I'm back because of Gerry.

Kate: Take those wet things off. (She looks at him) You look thin.

Dan: How is he?

Kate: It's a year today, Dan. It's like an anniversary or a birthday. I feel I should be celebrating or something. He hasn't uttered a sensible word in a year.

Dan: Not a word?

Kate: Nothing.

Dan: You said sensible. Then he says something. What does he say?

Gerry: (FROM ANOTHER ROOM) Missing, Always missing.

Kate: You see.

Dan: What's he saying?

Kate: I don't know.

Dan: It must mean something. Has he been like this the whole time?

Kate: I knew something would happen that night. I should have done more to stop him from going out.

Dan: Sure, he's the most pig-headed man I know. Nothing you could have done would have kept him away from his music.

Kate: But in my head I saw his favourite chair - empty and deserted. And Dan (SIGH) I saw the blue wind that night. (SHE EMITS A SOB) And I let him go!

Dan: I don't know if what you have is a curse or a gift Kate. But you are too hard on yourself. (SOUND OF COT ROCKING) Who's this then? I remember Gerry telling me you were expecting.

Kate: That's our Rosalee.

Dan: She looks like Gerry's mother.

Kate: I don't know. Some say she looks like me.

Dan: Yes, I can see it. Around the eyes. Incredible!

Kate: No, that's the one thing that is normal.around here.

Dan: HE LAUGHS) So it is. It must be hard for you with Gerry's mind like that, though. Has he been able to work?

Kate: No, I've been working on my silk scarves. It doesn't bring a lot in but I can work at home and look after them both. Gerry gets a little on long term sick leave. We had a little saved too.

Dan: I should have been here. I could have helped out.

Kate: We've been ok so far.

Dan: What did the doctor say ?

Gerry: (SPEAKS IN A MONOTONOUS TONE, FROM OFFSTAGE)
Missing. There's always something missing.

Kate: (COMFORTING GERRY IN A LOUD VOICE TO ANOTHER ROOM) There, there, love. (TO DAN) See. He just stares out the window. The doctor says there is nothing physically wrong with him. He thinks he might have got a shock or something. Wants me to bring a psychiatrist in. I don't want him taken away from me.

Dan: There's not many a psychiatrist that would understand what's wrong with Gerry Cooper.

Kate: I'm afraid the psychiatrist is coming tomorrow to arrange for him to be committed. He has to snap out of it by then. If not, he'll be in other hands. We won't be able to help him. Dan. I'm glad you're here. When you went missing, I didn't know what to think.

Dan: I had to go. I couldn't help then. Now that it's a year later, it's another matter. We just may have our chance to save him.

Kate: Where have you been?

Gerry (PLAYS A LITTLE TUNE ON THE SAXWHICH THEN FADES)

Dan: I've been living on an island off the west coast of Ireland. Sometimes I'd take the boat across and climb the hills in Connemara. No one would have ever found me there. I needed time to think.

Kate: And what have you come up with?

Dan: It's a bit mad.

Kate: I'd do anything, You know that.

Dan: Well, let's have a look at him then.

(SOUNDS OF MOVING TOWARDS GERRY AT THE WINDOW. GERRY IS NOT COMMUNICATIVE.)

Kate: Gerry, I have a visitor for you. It's Dan, who has been missing all this time. He's going to help us. (TO DAN) I just keep talking to him. I don't know if he can even hear me but I feel if I stop trying to get through to him, he'll be lost forever. You try.

Dan: Hello Gerry.

( DAN LOOKS CLOSER AT GERRY WHO STARES IN FRONT OF HIM.)

Dan: Nothing. (TO KATE) Now, you're going to think that I'm crazy.

Kate: I'm listening.

Dan: I know what's wrong with him.

Gerry: Missing, something missing.

Dan: What's he saying?

Kate: He keeps mumbling that something's missing.

Dan: What is missing?

Kate: I don't know. His mind maybe. And sometimes he just blows this one note over and over and over again.

Dan: I'm sure then.

Kate: What Dan?

Dan: He's had an episode with the sí.

Kate: What's that?

Dan: He's been taken by the fairies.

Kate: Ahh! Don't joke Dan! Isn't he right there before you? You can touch his cheek and stroke his hair.

Dan: (REACHES OUT AND TOUCHES GERRY) I feel him. But I'm not taking about physically.

Kate: What do you mean ?

Dan: There are other forms of being taken.

Kate: You're being ridiculous.

Dan: I'm not joking. Didn't I hear the stories myself from Gerry's old great grandmother!

Kate: But they're just stories. That's all they were. You said it yourself.

Dan: Did you ever meet the old lady?

Kate: I met her once. She could hardly speak English. She lived in the past.

Dan: She spoke English all right. She just didn't want the old language to be forgotten. As for the past, maybe it was a better place to be.

Kate: You've got to be kidding, Dan. They were starving.

Dan: You're right. But still. They weren't afraid to use their imagination.

Kate: Exactly. Imagination. That's all it is.

Dan: I spent a year studying fairy lore.

Kate: You've lost your mind too.

Dan: No Kate. Listen. We're not talking about little shiny flittering things here. These beings look just like you or me.

Kate: It's the isolation. You were away too long Dan.

Dan: No, I'm telling you. They are an ancient people. Everyone I talked to had a strong respect for them. And fear. They're dangerous and tricky. That's why they've been able to survive so long.

Kate: Yeah, right. Bad fairies!

Dan: You above all people should believe.

Gerry: (PLAYS A LITTLE TUNE) Missing, always missing.

Kate: That is all the more reason for me to be sceptical.

Dan: You weren't there that night. You don't know what happened. There was this woman.

Kate: Go on.

Dan: It was a night like tonight. Remember ?

Kate: I do.

Dan: Well, we went down to the jazz club. Gerry really got going. He was playing like he never had before. (DAN TAKES UP GERRY'S HAND AND STROKES IT)

Kate: He was a great musician. It was a shame he couldn't make a living out of it.

Dan: That's the way with the good ones. He was meant for the stage.

(FADE LIGHTS AND LINK WITH JAZZ MUSIC)



SCENE TWO: ONE YEAR AGO

Male Announcer: (IN DEEP, SEXY, SMOOTH VOICE) Welcome to New York's Blue Wind Club. Welcome to the Blue Wind Club. For the best in jazz and blues (TRAILING OFF) the Blue Wind Club..Wind Club......

SOUND: A COLD WIND

Anncr: You have been listening to Gerry Cooper on sax.

SOUND: CLAPPING

Anncr: And Dan Ryder on piano.

SOUND: CLAPPING

Anncr Back to them now for a last one.

SOUND: CLAPPING

Gerry: Thanks very much everybody. We'd like to end up with a pensive number called Body and Soul.

MUSIC: 'BODY AND SOUL' 2 MINUTES (REFER TO CD NONE BUT THE LONELY HEART BY CHARLIE HAYDEN AND CHRIS ANDERSON

Gerry: That's it ladies and gentlemen.. Wait a minute. Who do we have here? A glamorous lady is coming up here. She is whispering something in my ear. (TO GIORSAL) What? Yes. Ok. (TO THE AUDIENCE) Ladies and gentlemen. We are going to have a last song. (TO GIORSAL) What's your name honey? What? Jershal ? (TO AUDIENCE) Ok. Let's have a big hand for Jershal with East of the Sun West of the Moon,

SOUND CLAPPING


EAST OF THE SUN, WEST OF THE MOON, 3 MINUTES (REFER TO THEGERRY MULLIGAN SAX VERSION OR FRANK SINATRA ONE, FIND ONE WITH FEMALE VOICE)

Gerry: That was beautiful. Goodnight everybody. A big hand for the mysterious lady.

SOUND CLAPPING (FADE)

Gerry: (TO GIORSAL) Seriously, that was a great song.

Giorsal: You weren't bad yourself. Why don't you come and join me at my table?

Gerry: OK. What are you having?

Giorsal: Champagne.

Gerry What? I didn't mean::

Giorsal: It's al-right, Gerry. I have a bottle on ice and two glasses at sitting over there.

Gerry: A real high flyer. You don't mind if I get myself a beer? That stuff gives me a headache.

SOUND A CHAIR BEING PULLED UP AND GERRY TAKING A SIP OF BEER.

Gerry: Ahh! That's what I call a drink. Cheers!

Giorsal: You were so good tonight. You must know I've been waiting a long time for you.

Gerry: I'm not that good. There are loads of other good musicians.

Giorsal: That's not why I was waiting for you.

Gerry: What do you mean? You must have made a mistake. I don't know you.

Giorsal: There is no mistake.

Gerry: My name is Gerry Cooper.

Giorsal: I know who you are. You are an O'Flaherty from Connemara.

Gerry: I had an ancestor of that name. But that was a long time ago.

Giorsal: Hmhh! Those things don't just vanish into thin air. Poof!

SOUND SNAP OF FINGERS IN THE AIR

Giorsal: They don't go away just because it was a long time ago.

Gerry: This is a new country.

Giorsal: Don't I know it! I want to go home.

Gerry: Why don't you?

Giorsal: I can't yet. I have to do something. Maybe later.

Gerry: You know I am only a little bit O'Flaherty. I have Scottish blood, Welsh blood, some Italian, a bit of English. I'm even part Jewish.

Giorsal: There's enough in you.

Gerry: It's not the same here. What do you want me for?

Giorsal: I had a pact with Tómas O'Flaherty.

Gerry: I still don't understand.

Giorsal: I may look young to you, Gerry. But I am very old, very old indeed.

Gerry: Yeah right. Half the guys in here would love to be in my place. Sitting here with you.

Giorsal: What I am saying is that I knew Tómas. It is years ago now. He wasn't a nice man. But he did care about music. We usually don't interfere with human things but it was a special time. Strangers were taking over the land. Tómas gave us the music to mind. We promised to keep the music until it could be appreciated again.

Gerry: And what's that got to do with me?

Giorsal: You're the first O'Flaherty to play music since then.

Gerry: But I don't even like that old stuff!

Giorsal: Music is music. What I have is that spark that makes all music magical.

Here, O'Flaherty, take this instrument and start playing. You'll feel the music right through you.

HE TAKES THE SAX AND STARTS TO PLAY WOMEN OF IRELAND ON SAX
-REFER TO THE BOB JAMES THREE CD FOR THE JAZZ VERSION. THE CHRISTIANS DID A VOCAL POP VERSION. SEAN O'RIADA DID THE TRADITIONAL VERSION.

SOUND: (GERRY STARTS LAUGHING AND TAPPING HIS FEET)

Gerry: That's amazing!

Giorsal: Play something else.

Gerry: Sorry. It's getting late. We should be heading for home. My wife will be worried. We just found out that we're expecting a baby. She didn't want me to come out in this storm.

Giorsal: It will just take a moment.

Gerry: No really.

Giorsal: Just put your hand on this crystal, Gerry and the music will be yours.

Gerry: I have to go.

Giorsal: It will only take a minute.

Gerry: Ok, If it won't be long.

Giorsal: Gerry, through you, I have given the O'Flaherty back the music.

Gerry: (Smiling) Yeah!

Giorsal: Since it was a formal agreement, please put your hand on the stone.

Gerry: I don't like the sound of that. Ah, what harm could it do?

SOUND: GERRY PUTS HIS HAND ON THE STONE)

Giorsal: Survivor of the O'Flaherty, did I not fulfil my promise to return the music to your people? (silence)

Giorsal: (urging him on) Gerry.

Gerry: What?

Giorsal: I'm talking to you. Answer me. Haven't I fulfilled my promise?

Gerry: You have.

Giorsal: And do you want anything else?

Gerry: No, I don't.

Giorsal: Then, I will keep you with me. We will play music together.

Gerry: What do you mean?

Giorsal: I mean that you will stay here with me.

Gerry: You mean you're going to keep me here against my will.

Giorsal: That's exactly what I'm doing.

Gerry: You can't do that.

Giorsal: It's done

Gerry: (ANXIOUS) No.

Giorsal: I do nothing that was not agreed upon. You said there was no other wish you wanted. No wish to leave. No wish to take your sax.

Gerry: I shouldn't have to say those things.

Giorsal: But you always have to say what you want. Otherwise, things can get twisted or misunderstood.

Gerry: My wife's waiting at home. She'll be worried.

Giorsal: Your wife, above all people, should know. If she believes her own intuition.

Giorsal: (IN A FORCEFUL VOICE) Take your instrument, Gerry.

SOUND: A COLD WIND

Gerry: No!

SOUND: FOOTSTEPS.

GERRY GETS UP AND STARTS TO WALK AWAY. GIORSAL PASSES GERRY THE SAX AGAIN)

Giorsal: Play Gerry! You will soon forget all about home. We'll soon be far away from this world until we play here again next year.

Dan: (FROM OFFSTAGE AND GETTING LOUDER AS HE GETS CLOSER) Come on Gerry!

(GERRY JUST PLAYS THE SAX 'WOMEN OF IRELAND' AGAIN)

Dan: Gerry. We've got to get going. (TO GIORSAL) Wait a minute. I know what you are.

Giorsal: Then you should be bowing to me.

Dan: I bow to no one.

Giorsal: I know you too Dan. But leave him to me. It is what is best.
For the world.

Dan: For what world, your Majesty?

Giorsal: That's more like it. What is above, so is below. Our worlds are a reflection of each other.

Dan: Well then, Gerry and I will be going off to our world. Goodbye. C'mon Gerry.

Gerry: Dan. I'll play you a tune.

Dan: No, Gerry, we've got to get going home.

Gerry: But this is my home. I'm going to stay with.. (A PAUSE AS HE LOOKS AT GIORSAL) ah....whatshername.

Dan: What about Kate? She's expecting a baby.

Gerry: You look after her . I'm staying here to play music for a little while longer. I'll be home when I can.

Dan: You're making a huge mistake.

Giorsal: You've got to go, Dan. Bye.

SOUND: COLD WIND BLOWING



SCENE THREE:

30 SECOND-1MINUTES MUSIC LINK AGAIN POSSIBLY MILES DAVIS BLUE IN GREEN FROM THE KIND OF BLUE RECORDING)

Kate: You certainly tell a good story. I can hardly wait 'til the end.

Dan: Well, that's about it. I found myself outside the door of the Blue Wind Club and couldn't get in. I was thinking of going to the police, but what could I tell them? Then I found Gerry wandering around the streets like this.

Kate: Like what?

Dan: Like what he is now.

Kate: You mean catatonic.

Dan: I suppose.

Kate: Then what happened.

Dan: I saw that he got home all right. Then I took off. I was scared. I had to go away and make sense of it all. I had to understand.

Kate: I know Dan. You were always a good friend. To both of us. It's not your fault. (She pats his hand) But if you know something that will bring back my man, spit it out. By your story, bewitched he certainly is.

Dan: I'll tell you all I know. Then we'll have a fight on our hands. I have a plan. The stories the old lady told me, what I've found out in books and the tales of the island people will give us enough information. For a start anyway.

Kate: You are really convinced of this fairy stuff?

Dan: I know what I know. The important thing to remember is that we have only one night to save him.

Kate: I guess it's worth trying.

Dan: We must also always have a piece of iron with us.

Kate: Why's that?

Dan: They can't touch you when you have iron with you. It's
something like in those children's games when you have den. That's where it probably comes from.

Kate: It can't hurt. Can you pass me that paint brush? I want to finish this scarf before Rosalee wakes up.

Kate: Thanks.

Dan: That's lovely Kate. I love that shade of blue. You have a real talent.

Kate: Thanks. I enjoy it.

Dan: Back to what we're going to do. Here's what we'll do. Trick her at her own game!

Kate: How's that?

Kate: This is what I learned when I was on the island. There are 12 fairy winds. The one you saw, the blue one, comes once a year. It's a wind from the southwest. For us, it usually means a storm and it is a sign that winter is coming, to get ready to spend more time indoors. For them, it is a bridge between their world and ours.

Kate: That's why we had to wait a year before we could even try to rescue Gerry.

Dan: That's right. I'm sure it means more than that too. When I was over there, the locals were always talking about the night of the Big Wind. 1839, I think. It brought destruction and mayhem to our world but the people I was talking to think it was worse in the world of the fairies. Apparently, all but a few left the country at that time, never to return. They said it has something to do with the Blue Wind.

Kate: Are you saying that fairies are vulnerable at this time?

Dan: (PENSIVELY) It may be. It may be. It's a sad wind for them I think. We have to be prepared. But we may just have a chance. We have to convince ourselves that we are strong. Here's what we'll do.

(THEY PUT THEIR HEADS TOGETHER AND START WHISPERING.) 30 SEC. TO 1 MINUTE MUSIC BRIDGE ST. GERMAINE FROM THE TOURIST RECORDING.


SCENE FOUR: (NIGHT CLUB SCENE AGAIN.)

SOUND: HANDS SLAPPING DOWN ON TABLE

Kate: I want him back. You've got your clutches into him now but I know that he doesn't want to be here. It's like he is under a spell.
All right, whoever you are, let's bargain.

Giorsal: That's more like it.

Kate: Let him go. You can take me.

Giorsal: That's no offer. You're almost one of us as it is.

Kate: Just because I see things sometimes. I am not one of you.

Giorsal: It still won't do. Anyway. You have a baby. You have to look after what's her name, Rosalee, isn't it? Maybe she'd like to come live with us.

Kate: Leave her out of this. Let's see. Gold? I've saved up some money. I know how you love your treasures.

Giorsal: Nice try. We like our treasure but it is only to attract human's attention. Unlike you people, we know it is all just an illusion.

Kate: (CLOSE UP TO GIORSAL CONFRONTING HER)
There must be something!

Giorsal: There is something. I'll play you for him.

Kate: You mean cards.

Giorsal: Something like that.

Kate: And if I win, you will give him back to me.

Giorsal: I will.

Kate: And if I lose?

Giorsal: He stays with me forever and I can go home.

Kate: Fine.

Giorsal: There's nothing I like better than a good game. You're on. Shake?

Kate: Shake. I'll be back tonight.

Giorsal: I am looking forward to it.

(DAN WALKS IN)

Giorsal: Well, if it isn't Dan Rider. Come on in.

Dan: Kate, you go on. I'll catch up to you in a bit.

Kate: OK. I'll be right outside. I need the air.

(KATE EXITS)

Dan: (TO GIORSAL) I want to talk to you.

Giorsal: What's the matter? You think Kate is getting cold feet?

Dan: Kate? Never. She's a strong woman.

Giorsal: Well?

Dan: It's me. I'm worried about her. She's normal. That's not to say
she isn't special. It's just I don't think the odds are fair.

Giorsal: Because I'm with the sí?

Dan: As a matter of fact, yes.

Giorsal: Everybody has the wrong idea about us. I am not going to shrink, sprout wings and fly away. I am not an angel that sits on top of a Christmas tree. I am not a witch stirring up potions. I am just like you.

Dan: If you were just like me, Gerry would still be at home?

Giorsal: We have our tricks. Our curses are real and so is fairy dust.
These were given to us by the earth. That is the advantage of being so old. You pick up a thing or two. But in a fair fight, the fighting's got to be fair.

Dan: That's good to know. .Just one more thing. Why didn't you take me? I don't have a family. I would be happy just to play music or write a few lines all day. Maybe you don't think I am good enough.

Giorsal: Is this a trick? Are you trying to get information to use against me?

Dan: Are you always on the defensive?

Giorsal: I have to be nowadays. It's become a habit.

Dan: Well then, did you not think I was good enough, or what?

Giorsal: Who's on the defensive now? That had nothing to do with it.

Dan: Then I'm not good-looking enough.

Giorsal: You look fine to me. But you know we are not attracted to humans like that. Our love is different.

Dan: Well, what was it then?

Giorsal: It's the simple fact that we made an agreement with Gerry's family. I gave him back the music.

Dan: (SIGHS) And if you kept the agreement, why are you keeping him?

Giorsal: He made it so easy to trick him. I couldn't help myself..

Dan: But why don't you let him go now? He's been with you for a year.

Giorsal: It's something to do with continuity. Because of who Gerry is. The link to finding a new home.

Dan: Here?

Giorsal: Yes, I'm getting used to it now.

Dan: But it's really not that nice here. There are bad smells, loud noises, traffic, too many buildings.

Giorsal: But there's an energy. All those people crowded together. Thinking. The buildings and machines are just an illusion anyway. I can see the energy underneath the land. It is just the same. It is still there you know. The trees and grass would soon grow back. If allowed. We just have to wait and in the meantime, adapt.

But I don't think you are interested in my problems. I think you are in love with Kate.

Dan: What of it?.

Giorsal: I told you before. I don't do love potions.

Dan: But sometimes you can see the future.

Giorsal: So can Kate.

Dan: Can I just ask you one thing ? If Kate loses and Gerry stays with you, do you think she can forget him?

Giorsal: You mean do you have a chance with Kate?

Dan: Yeah.

Giorsal: There'll only be one man for Kate.
Sorry Dan.


Dan: Then take me. Surely I can give you the continuity you need.
Give Gerry back. Let Kate win.

Giorsal: It will be a fair fight. That's all I have to say.

Dan: I'll be watching you

SOUND: (DAN WALKS OUT AND SLAMS THE DOOR)

Giorsal: (TO HERSELF)

I like it here. I like the music. There's something sad about it. Yet it makes you want to move. It goes through your body and makes you dance.

The full moon comes out tonight. We will have our big dance once again this year. November and the blue wind. This time we'll have the new music. The sax... Jazz...

(PENSIVELY) I like the people here. They are not afraid of their own shadows. They are not afraid of me.

I need Gerry. I have to keep the music. I can't let them know what's at stake. Our very existence depends on it. I didn't come here to keep up my end of the promise. It was much more than that.

We had a beautiful home. There was this hawthorn tree that had been there since time began. It was the door to our underground chambers and the meeting place of our people from four counties. Then our tree was cut down. And we were left without a home.

Some humans tried to help. There were protests against it. Some of the old ones tried to protect us. There are some young ones now too. But in the end, human's old weakness, greed, got the better of them.

People left our homes alone for years. They were afraid of us. Now they don't even believe we exist. It doesn't matter how much bad luck we pile on them. They'll always find a logical explanation for it. We can't get away with anything.

I don't mind change. I have always liked people. The fact that these ones are craftier all the better. I like a challenge. It makes the trick all the better.
I have to keep that man....and the music..... or I might as well be human.

MUSIC BRIDGE SPIRIT OF THE WATER FROM RAINDANCE CD BY DAN AND GORDON GIBSON)


SCENE FIVE: (BACK IN THE FLAT. GERRY'S BY THE WINDOW. DAN AND KATE COME IN)

Kate: What have I done?

Dan: Only what you had to do.

Kate: We are stark-raving mad. Do you know what we are up against?

Dan: There's no other way.

Kate: I just don't know if I can pull it off.

Dan: You have a pure heart Kate and you love him.

Kate: None of us is that pure.

Dan: There's just one thing. We haven't considered that he might not want to come back. ( DAN LOOKS SHYLY BUT EXPECTANTLY AT KATE)

Kate: But that wouldn't be the real him. We have to put all those thoughts behind us. What I have to know now is whether you will help me with Gerry. I need all the help I can get.

Dan: I have already placed a piece of iron in his pocket. Giorsal won't be able to touch him physically. All we have to do is get him out of that place and his mind should come back.

Kate: What am I going to do with Rosalee while I'm in the café? I'd better take her to my mother's. If anything happens to me, it's better she stay there. I mean it's not like Gerry could look after her. He doesn't even know she exists.

(IN THE LIVING ROOM. KATE IS PAINTING HER SCARVES THAT ARE HANGING.)

Kate: I'll just finish a few of these scarves before I go down to Club Blue Wind. It will help me focus.

Kate monologue:

From when I was very small, I knew things. Sometimes I could see things or tell what was going to happen. I didn't understand why my friends couldn't. I soon learned that this gift, as my mother called it, made me different to other girls. Some started saying, "Kate's off with the fairies". It was they way they said it that bothered me. I always tried to fit in.
So then I hid my gift. Even tried to deny I had it to myself.

Then I became the type of person people came to for advice. They just latched on to me like a suction cup.

Gerry was different. He knew about me, accepted it and didn't ask for any favours. It was natural to him. His great-grandmother had it too. She lived with them before she died. We used to joke when we were going out with each other. Gerry said I reminded him of his Granna. That 's what he called her. Then he would laugh and say, 'Granna's ninety-six."

I would poke him in the side but really, it made me feel more comfortable about the way I am. "Just like Granna"

I liked Gerry Cooper because he was so normal. I mean that in the best ways. That doesn't mean he was without his talent. He had such lovely hands. He could make anything out of wood. And he was great at the music. He just didn't make a big deal about how good he was at those things. They were just things he did. And it's Gerry, not me, they wanted all they time. I have to get him back.

(30 SECOND TO 1 MINUTE MUSIC LINK -JJ CAYLE AFTER MIDNIGHT FROM THE NATURALLY RECORDING)


SCENE SIX: (CLUB GIORSAL AND GERRY ARE WAITING IN THE CAFÉ. KATE ENTERS. SHE HAS A BRACELET OF IRON AROUND HER WRIST. SHE STARTS DOING GENTLE WARM-UP EXERCISES)

Giorsal: So Kate, we are going to do battle.

Kate: I'm ready.

Giorsal: I choose.

Kate: Yes, but you promised to be fair.

Giorsal: Oh, I'll be fair al-right. We'll do the combat by recognition.

Kate: You can tell me how to play in a minute. I want to get things straight before we start.

Giorsal: What do you want to know?

Kate: The terms. If I win, you release Gerry. No tricks.

Giorsal: No tricks. He will be free to leave. The only catch is that if he wants to take the music with him, his life will be shortened.

Kate: Why's that?

Giorsal: That's just how it is. It's not one of my terms.

Kate: What exactly are your terms then?

Giorsal: If you win, Gerry is free. If I win, he stays with me for good.

Kate: Fine. Now what's this game about?

Giorsal: Every year on this night we have a dance just before midnight. Several people will be joining us on the dance floor before the procession under the rainbow rings around the moon.

Your job is to recognize Gerry from the back before he leaves in the procession. He may appear to be changed but if your love is true, you should be able to recognize him. The first person you touch, you have to keep.

Kate: And what do you do?

Giorsal: I try to prevent you from seeing him.

Kate: But you have all the advantages.

Giorsal: In this game I don't. Anyway I see your iron bracelet. You know I can't touch you with that. I'm sure you have something tricky up your sleeve too. So don't talk to me about disadvantage. Come on let's get ready. It's almost time.

SOUND: CLOCK STRIKES MIDNIGHT.

Giorsal: Our guests have arrived.

Kate: But it's hard to see their faces. They keep criss-crossing the stone circle. Where am I?

Giorsal: It is our place for celebrations.

Kate: Al-right. Don't distract me.

SOUND: CROW CAWING

Kate: (TO SELF) Calm down. It's only an old bird.
(TO GIORSAL) Stop it. What are you doing with those long pieces of material? I can't see.

Giorsal: I'm dancing.

(KATE THINKS SHE SEES GERRY ACROSS THE CIRCLE)

Kate: (To Self) That's him! I see him! No! That's not him! Imagine stuck your whole life with someone you didn't want. Living with a stranger!

I suppose it's not so unusual. Many couples go through it. Drift apart but don't have the nerve or energy to leave. It's not like that with me andGerry. We are happy with each other.

(TO GIORSAL) You have made your point. You are a great dancer. But go way now Giorsal. I have a job to do. (LOUDLY) Gerry!

Kate: (TO GERRY) Wait. (SHE TOUCHES MAN'S SHOULDER) Gerry, it's Kate. I want you back.

(GERRY TURNS AROUND).

Gerry: (SURPRISED) Kate?

Giorsal: No. He's coming with me!
Awww! (IN PAIN) How did he get iron on him?

Gerry: Kate, you're crying. What's the matter?

Kate: (SOBBING) Absolutely nothing. I'm so happy.

Giorsal: Very well. Kate you've won.

Kate: (SMILING) I know.

Giorsal: But I'm not so sure you'll be so happy in the end. Remember the curse. If he lets the music out, his life will be short.

(DAN ENTERS)

Kate: I can live with that for the moment. Oh hi Dan.

Dan: Hi Kate. And Gerry. Great to see you both together again.

Dan: (TO GIORSAL) Thanks. That was good of you.

Giorsal: It was a fair fight.

Dan: (WINKING) I believe you. By the way, any chance you could teach me a few tricks.

Giorsal: What do you mean?

Dan: I thought I might hang around, if that's ok with you.

Giorsal: I told you before that I don't love in that way.

Dan: Easy there. That's not what I want either. I thought that maybe we could play a few tunes together, write a few lines, maybe I could learn a few spells...

Giorsal: Are you trying to become one of us Dan Rider?

Dan: I could think of worse things.

Giorsal: (LAUGHING) You forget. We choose you. You don't choose us.

Dan: Then choose me. I know all the old stories. I've been back to the old land and love it. I don't belong here. Come on. I'm not a half-bad musician. I'll play to you on the long winter nights.

Giorsal: All right, Dan. Since you know so much about us and may have your uses, we'll give it a try. It is not what we usually do.

Dan: Things change.

Giorsal: That they do.

(30 SECOND TO 1 MINUTE MUSIC LINK CHARLIE PARKER, MY OLD FLAME, CHARLIE PARKER COLLECTION)


SCENE SEVEN:

(THE APARTMENT. KATE AND GERRY ENTER AND SIT DOWN IN LIVING ROOM. GERRY HAS MIND BACK BUT DOESN'T REMEMBER MUCH. KATE LOOKS AFTER HIM.)

Kate: Do you want to lie down?

Gerry: I'm fine. Just a little confused.

Kate: That's understandable.

Gerry: I was playing at the club when this girl started to sing. Then I don't remember a thing. What happened? I black out or something?

Kate: Yeah something like that.

Gerry: And how'd you get there? Dan call ya?

Kate: He did.

Gerry: Dan stayed on at the club. Who was that woman?

Kate: (CHANGING THE SUBJECT SLIGHTLY) I wish I'd heard her sing.

Gerry: Yes, she sang like an angel.

Kate: I bet.

Gerry: Who is she anyway?

Kate: Let's just say she blew in with the wind.

Gerry: I hope Dan talks her into playing with us again.

Kate: I don't think that will happen.

Gerry: You're right. She's probably been snapped up by someone else. Ah well, it's certainly good to be home. Come here (HE HUGS KATE)

Look there's my old sax.

(GERRY SEES THE SAX IN THE CORNER, PICKS IT US AND STARTS TO PLAY IT. POSSIBLE SONG LIKE GATO BARBIERI'S STRAIGHT INTO THE SUNRISE 2-3 MINUTES)

Kate: I forgot you had that old thing.

Gerry: I have never felt it play so well. (HAPPY) I can even play songs I don't know. It's fantastic.

Kate: Be careful!

Gerry: Kate, it's magical.

Kate: That's what I am worried about.

Gerry: This is what I've always wanted to do with music.

Kate: Why don't you leave it Gerry? You've been off work for a year. It's time you were easing back into it. We need the money.

Gerry: But I don't understand how clear everything is. I understand what this music is about. I can't leave this, Kate. This is too big. The world has to hear about this.(HE RUSHES OUT)

Kate: (TO HERSELF) Gerry no! At what price? You will die young if the music is released. Is there no way to stop him? Maybe it's just a myth.

(MUSIC LINK 30 SECS. -1 MINUTE GATO BARBIERI RECORDED) FADE LIGHTS TO SHOW TIME CHANGE.

Kate: I'm glad at least you could stay for the birthday party.

Gerry: Wouldn't miss it for the world! My little Rosalee one today! Hey Kate, leave that bag there.

Kate: Do you have to go again? Why don't you stay with us?

Gerry: I'd love to Kate. But I have this tour. It would be a mess if I cancelled.

Kate: But you're never home.

Gerry: It's been a mad year al-right. Playing somewhere different every night.

Kate: I was thinking that we could settle down again. You couldn't be any more successful. We don't need any more money. And I get so lonely waiting here.

Gerry: I'll be home to stay soon. But first there's been an offer of a tour of Europe and maybe Japan.

Kate: I hope you haven't accepted. You can't go on like this. The constant moving, the late nights, the drink.

Gerry: I'm as fit as a fiddle. (HE LAUGHS)::.. or a sax.

Kate: No one is that strong.

Gerry: Listen! I've looked forward to being with you and Rosalee for a long time. But you know that this is something I really have to do. I've just got to play.

Kate: I do know that. But remember you were away for a whole year before, in your head that is. I was so glad to have you back. (PLEADING) I thought we'd have time together.

Gerry: And so we will. Just a little longer.

Kate: It's not only me. I'm thinking of Rosalee. She needs both her parents. She needs you. You've hardly spent any time with her.

Gerry: I will. I promise. I'm delighted to be a father. She's lovely child. Just like my grand-mother. A little of you around the eyes.

Kate: But do you know what it is to be a father? A child brings a big change to people's lives. You can't travel like this anymore.

Gerry: I understand Kate. Once I do this tour, there will be other people to take over.

Kate: Promise me you'll look after yourself. I need you.

Gerry: Anything, for you.

Kate: Then stay!

Gerry: I can't.

(KATE EXITS, SLAMMING INSIDE DOOR- GERRY STAYS FOR MONOLOGUE)

GERRY MONOLOGUE:

The past doesn't disappear into thin air. All through my life there were times I felt bad and didn't know why. I felt guilty for things I wasn't responsible for. Things that should have stayed in the past. Things I didn't know about but still felt the traces. Like smoke from an airplane across the sky.

Those ancestors didn't have much to pass on. But what they had, they held on to so tight. Like a death-grip. Then you're left protecting this thing, this idea, this property with your life. And you don't know why.

Snip. I don't want my child to be burdened with these strings to the past. Chop. I don't want it to feel bad for no reason. Cut. How can I feel the strength of roots without feeling all the pain of the past?

I thought I saw Katie's blue wind for a minute. A new start. And a light. Ah the warmth. (reaches up arms and stretches) Wait for me! Wait for me!

(HE PICKS UP THE SUITCASE AND WALKS OUT THE OUTSIDE DOOR)


SCENE EIGHT:

(IN THE NEW YORK APARTMENT. THE CHILD HAS FALLEN ASLEEP ON THE SOFA.

Kate: (To Herself) Ah, I want to put my feet up. I've had it.

SOUND: (TELEPHONE RINGS)


Kate: (TO HERSELF) Stop. I'll unplug it. . (SHE UNPLUGS THE PHONE)

There. I don't want it to wake you up Rosalee. I should carry you to bed but you look so peaceful there on the sofa. I'll leave you for a minute.

That's what I'd like. Peace and quiet.

(SPEAKING TO ROSALEE ASLEEP ON THE SOFA) It won't be long now before Daddy's home again with us. Sleep now, sleep. When you wake, you will curl your little fingers around mine. I'll play tickles and peek-a-boo.

(SHE TURNS ON THE RADIO. THERE IS JAZZ MUSIC T. MONK. I-2 MINUTES)

Kate: Listen, that's jazz. That's what your daddy plays. He's brought music around the world and soon he's coming back to us. I bet he'll play something just for you.

Kate: I'll plug in the phone later tonight because he said he'd call to see how we are doing. And to say when he's coming home.

Then he won't go away again. He'll stay with us. The three of us tied together in a little bundle.

(THE SONG FINISHES ON RADIO AND ANNOUNCER SPEAKS)

V/O: The great sax musician Gerry Cooper died earlier tonight. He collapsed on stage during a concert in Tokyo, apparently due to a heart attack.

Kate: (In Anguish) No!

V/O: Cooper's music and style had a magical quality that took jazz by storm. He was at the end of a two-year long tour and was due to fly home to New York later this week. He will be greatly missed.

Kate: (CRYING) Ah Gerry. It can't be true. Someone would have told me first. Oh, the telephone. I must plug it in. Why do they make the holes so small? There. (SHE PLUGS IN TELEPHONE, IT RINGS)

Kate: Hello. Yes, this is Kate Cooper.

(SHE LISTENS)

Kate: Bad news? I heard something on the radio. I hope it isn't true. It is? Oh no.

SOUND :SHE LETS THE RECEIVER DANGLE AND DROP.

V/O: In tribute, this is Gerry Cooper recorded live in Paris.

(BRING UP MUSIC, GATO BARBIERI 'ADENTRA')

Kate: He'll be coming home now. But in a box. We knew there was a chance he'd die young if he continued with that music. It was part of the agreement. It was the chance we took. I knew it at the back of my mind but part of me had forgotten it. Perhaps I should have left him as he was. Not have fought for him. But no. That was no way to live. He wasn't himself. That wasn't Gerry. He and the music belonged to the world.

SOUND: COLD BLUE WIND


SCENE NINE:

MUSIC UP. NIGHT CLUB SET UP AGAIN.

Announcer: Welcome to the 'Blue Wind Club' , (MORE SOFTLY) 'the Blue Wind Club' (EVEN MORE SOFTLY) 'The Blue::..'

KATE WALKS IN AND SEES GIORSAL.

Kate: (ANGRILY) I should have known. The same night his mind went, the same night I get him back and the same night he dies. The night of the bloody blue wind. I hope you're happy now. He was coming back to me. (EMOTIONAL) And now he's gone. I'm left to bring up a daughter alone.

Giorsal: I'm sorry Kate. I really am.

Kate: He's not really with you, is he? I mean maybe he's not really dead.

Giorsal: I don't have power over life or death. But I do know that Gerry Cooper will live on in many ways.. His music. In your heart and through his little one.

Kate: You'll not take Rosalee away? I couldn't take another loss.

Giorsal: Rosalee was born lucky.

Kate: Thank God. How are you doing Dan?

Dan: Real well. I'm happy, Kate. In fact I'm so happy that they've put me away in the hospital at Bellevue a couple of times, (HE LOOKS AT GIORSAL) Ballinasloe to you. (AND BACK TO KATE) But they didn't keep me too long. Her majesty helped me get out.

Giorsal: Just practising my tricks. I have been teaching Dan too.

Dan: And we've been playing together a lot. I've been doing a little writing too.

Kate: So I've heard. But don't you have to stay in her world all the time?

Dan: The divisions between both worlds are thinner now. Thanks to Gerry.
.
Giorsal: Don't stand there too long Dan. The energy disappears.
Gerry taught us that too. He released the energy. The music. Life.

SOUND: A COLD WIND.

MUSIC UP- GATO BARBIERI AND MYSTICA. -2 TO 3 MINUTES- FADE MUSIC
THE END/ FIN

Tuesday, August 23, 2005

Draft Screenplay

Audition for Life
Full-length Screenplay
Adaptation of Spring Awakening (Widerkind)



Characters
Gwen Walsh– a fourteen year old girl, in 2nd year, reasonably well-balanced, modern with good clothes sense, sociable but likes to spend time with herself. She is average at school but is talented in art. She has been writing in a diary for a year. She visits the poor but is attracted to the wild side. She finds Mack interesting because he believes in the devil.

Mack Grenier- a fifteen - year old boy in 3rd year He is attractive, confident and intelligent, with a great sense of humour. He has a very stable and relaxed family life although his parents are intellectuals . He claims to be a Satanist (really just to be cool), dresses all in black and has a stud under his lip. Despite this, parents and teachers like him. He can play most sports but is not really active in any. His best friend is Daragh.

Daragh Pender- a fifteen-year old boy in second year. He is small but good-looking enough. He is failing everything at school no matter how hard he tries. This is new. He used to be an average students. He is not self-confident and feels unloved. His parents are very strict and have too high expectations of him. The reason everything seems to be against him is that he is fighting depression, something that has just come upon him. He doesn’t know how handle it.

Martha Fallon- friend of Gwen’s in 2ndyear, pretty girl but very shy. Her parents are also very strict and sometimes beat her. She often is embarrassed by her good looks and hides them. While the other girls wear belly tops and tight skirts, she wears a sweater and keeps her hair tied back. She resents it when Gwen spends too much time with Mack.

Lizzie Blake- friend of Gwen’s in 2nd year, parents are very busy and don’t have much time for her. She is not as pretty as Gwen and Martha but she has sex-appeal and is boy crazy.

Tiff Walsh- Gwen’s mother, she feels she is reasonably close to her daughter and although she grew up in a liberal time, doesn’t quite know how to cope with Gwen growing up. She is separated from Gwen’s father and sometimes feels lonely.

Joe Walsh- Gwen’s father, he is not living with Gwen and her mother as her parents have separated. He lives in another city but sees Gwen when he can. He loves her but feels less in touch with her as she is growing up.

Michelle Grenier – Mack’s mother , kind , beautiful and sophisticated

James Grenier- Mack’s father

Mick Pender- Daragh’s father. He recently lost his wife. He has worked hard all his life and has sacrificed a lot for Daragh to get a good education.

Kelly Hammer – the female half of young couple next door to Mack. They have applied to adopt a child.

Kevin Hammer- new next door neighbour to Mack.

Winn Tuohey- She is Tiff’s best friend. She is also separated but has no children.

Ken Fallon – Martha’s much older brother. (about 32) He is very religious and a bit weird. He is always recording the lives of Martha’s friends to show how bad they are. He uses video and still cameras and sound equipment.

Marie and Colin Blake: Martha’s parents. The are older than the parents of other children of Martha’s age. Their family is all grown up. Martha was the “accident” and they are ashamed of her existence. She seems to symbolize their lust which they consider sinful except for procreation. They think they have been punished by this child. They are very strict, religious and believe in beating their children in order to bring them up and educate them properly. An older brother Ken is still living at home.

Christina and Peter Blake: Lizzie’s parents, they are extremely close, don’t quite know how to communicate with Lizzie. They find her annoying so end up ignoring her .

Teachers: William Mann, Silvia Bourke, Shirley Madden

Joseph Conneely – Mack’s mother’s cousin, a bachelor fisherman who lives in Connemara

Niuse in Pediatrics ward

Extras: a male make-up person, waiters, other teachers, parents, students, poor people, religious people

Action takes place in large town or small city in the west of Ireland present time plus in Connemara and on the sea.

FADE IN;

CUE MUSIC: AVRIL LAVIGNE SKATER BOY

SCENE 1: EXT. SECONDARY SCHOOL YARD-WEDNESDAY AFTERNOON, LATE SEPTEMBER

WIDE SHOT students streaming out of school . MEDIUM SHOT AND FOLLOW a group of three girls. They walk over to the to the side of the school and collect there talking and giggling but we don’t hear what they say. Medium shot two boys the same age pass. IN SLOW MOTION FOR A SECOND, the girls look at them . They look back and pass.

CUE CREDITS

FADE MUSIC

CLOSE UP: a hand-held camera is shown but we can’t see who is holding it. We then go into the camera and it is our eye. It pans toward a group of girls, Gwen, Martha and Lizzie , and when it reaches them it stops.

MEDIUM SHOT:

LIZZIE (EXCITED)

So let’s plan your sleepover!


GWEN

I got money for my birthday from Ma. So we can go shopping tomorrow.

LIZZIE

Great.

MARTHA

I only hope I’m allowed. You know how my parents are!

GWEN

Come anyway. I don’t have a birthday everyday. I want my best friends there.


LONG SHOT: THE GIRLS START WALKING HOME ALONG THE CANAL,

FADE UP MUSIC: SKATER BOY , AVRIL LAVIGNE

LONG SHOT: THE TWO BOYS, MACK AND DARAGH ARE SKATEBOARDING FURTHER DOWN THE CANAL

MARTHA

Look. There’s Daragh. He’s kind of cute. I know he’s not the brightest or the best looking. He just seems nice.

FADE MUSIC:

GWEN

Yeah, he is nice. I’ve seen him down at the homeless centre. Helping, you know. (BECOMES PENSIVE) Did you know that his friend Mack worships the Devil?

LIZZIE

I didn’t know that. But I do know he is gorgeous and smart. Don’t you just love him Gwen?

GWEN

I don’t know. There’s really no one that does it for me.

MARTHA

Well, I think he’s scary. All that talk about Satan.

LIZZIE

That’s all for show.

MARTHA

I couldn’t stand someone with an earring though his lip. It
creeps me out.

LIZZIE

I think he’s sexy.

GWEN

You think everybody is sexy.


LIZZIE (SHRUGS AND LOOKS AT TELEPHONE AND PRESSES BUTTONS)

So?


SCENE TWO: INT. CAFÉ AFTERNOON: Gwen’s mother Tiff is talking to old friend Winnie over coffee. Sound of television in the BG.

MED. CU ON PAIR

WINNIE

Do you want to go to the cinema on Saturday? There’s this really good Finnish film I’ve been wanting to see.


TIFF


I’d love to but I can’t. (SHE GRAMACES) It’s Gwen’s birthday and she’s having a sleepover with some friends.


WINNIE

A birthday party! Can I come?

TIFF

It’s not really a party. But you’re welcome. We can watch a video or something. I’m making a cake.


WINNIE

You’re supposed to be helping me with the diet. What do you do at these things anyway?


TIFF

Pretty much keep out of the way. My little girl is growing up!


WINNIE

Have you had the little talk yet, or is it still too early? Didn’t we learn everything at a sleepover?


TIFF

I gave Gwen a book on the subject last year. (SHE LOOKS UNCOMFORTABLE) I told her she could always come to me if she had any questions.



WINNIE

(LAUGHING) You can’t talk about sex with your own daughter .You! You were wild.


TIFF

(EMBARRASSED) It’s hard because it is my little girl.

(THOUGHTFUL) I wonder what she really knows.


CUT TO CU OF TELEVISION THAT IS SHOWING A TALK SHOW.

WINNIE

Sure television is the new teacher about everything.


TIFF

But it’s distorted. I should talk to her.


WINNIE

No matter what they say, it’s not a parent’s place. Think back ,Tiff. Would you have wanted your parents to lecture you? They have to experiment for themselves, be madly in love, be heartbroken.

TIFF

We didn’t get it right. We still haven’t.


WINNIE

Relax, Gwen’s a good kid. They’re all smarter than us that way.



SCENE THREE: INT. GWEN’S HOUSE, EVENING
GWEN’S BEDROOM: Gwen is writing in her diary. Her mother, Tiff, come in. Gwen closes the diary.

TIFF


So who’s coming to your sleepover?



GWEN

Lizzie and Martha if she’s allowed.



TIFF

What will I get for it?



GWEN

I thought I’d go shopping with the girls.


TIFF

OK. I’ll give you money for supplies. I thought I’d give you money for your birthday this year too. You could get something nice to wear.

GWEN

That would be great.


TIFF

Oh, Winnie’s coming over to keep me company.

GWEN

Cool.


TIFF

And I’m making a cake.


GWEN

(LIGHT-HEARTED COMPLAINING) Mom!


TIFF


You’re not so old that you’ll get away without one of my special death by chocolate birthday cakes.


GWEN

I can hardly wait.

SOUND OF MOBILE PHONE RINGING (TO SOUND OF ANNIE, SMOOTH TALKIN’ CRIMNALS)

GWEN


(SCREAMING EXCITEDLY) You can? That’s great. Yeah sure. That’s no problem.
(TO MOTHER) Matha is allowed if you phone her parents.

TIFF MAKES A SIGN TO SHOW SHE’LL PHONE DOWNSTAIRSAND LEAVES BEDROOM.

CUT TO CU MARTHA ON HER MOBILE PHONE.


MARTHA

I was sure they’d say no. My stupid brother was the worst. He tried to make out that that sleepovers were wrong but my parents said it was ok.

V/O SCREAMS OF HAPPINESS FROM THE TWO GIRLS.


INT: KITCHEN: Tiff is sitting there having a cup of tea,

TIFF

Do you want anything?


GWEN

No thank s. Did you phone Martha’s parents?


TIFF

Yes. Everything’s fine.

GWEN GOES OVER AND GIVES HER MOTHER A KISS.


GWEN

Goodnight then.


TIFF

Don’t forget that your father is coming to town on Friday to take you out to dinner.


GWEN

(YAWNING) I won’t. Good Night.

GWEN HAS A PORTABLE TV IN HER ROOM. IT IS ON AND SHE IS WATCHING IT. CLOSE UP AD FOR BATTLE OF THE BANDS.
V/O ADD (WRITE LATER) (TO TAKE PLACE IN A MONTH’S TIME)
ON SCREEN: CLIPS OF BANDS IN IT OTHER YEARS.

CUT TO SAME TV SCREEN IN ANOTHER TV, ANOTHER HOUSE.
PULL OUT TO REVEAL MACK AND DARAGH STUDYING WHILE WATCHING TELEVISION

CUE MUSIC: SUGARBABES, FREAK LIKE ME


DARAGH

Did you see that?

MACK

Yeah.

DARAGH

We have got to enter.

MACK

We’ll have to get a band together.

DARAGH

That’s what I’ve been telling you. I’m not bad at drums. You’re good at the guitar and writing songs. I don’t know what we were waiting for.

MACK

Neither of us can sing.

DARAGH

Well fuck them. We don’t need a singer.


MACK

We do.


DARAGH

Yeah, we do.


INT. GWEN’S ROOM.NIGHT. SHE IS ON THE MOBILE TO MARTHA WHILE WATCHING THE TV.

GWEN

Martha, did you see the Telly? (SCREECHES WITH EXCITEMENT THENWAITS FOR A RESPONSE) Yeah, we just have to enter. I’ll work on a song. Can you call Lizzie?

INT. MACK’S ROOM. NIGHT. MACK AND DARAGH ARE ALSO ENTHUSIASTIC ABOUT THE CONTEST. MACK’S ROOM IS PLASTERED WITH HEAVY METAL POSTERS. THERE IS A HUGE PENTAGRAM PAINTED ON THE CEILING. ON A TABLE IS A CEREMONIAL KNIFE, BOOKS ON MAGIC, A CLAY BOWL OF INCENSE AND ANOTHER OF SALT. THERE IS ALSO A LITTLE STATUE OF BUDDHA AND A SMALL STATUE OF THE VIRGIN MARY.


MACK

Where are we going to get a song?


DARAGH

You are going to write one. Nice and lively, like.


THERE IS SILENCE FOR A MINUTE.

DARAGH

If we do well enough maybe I won’t have to worry about my exams anymore. I’m fed up. I can’t keep my mind on anything long enough to learn anything. I don’t know what’s wrong with me. I can’t remember anything.


MACK

Calm down, will you, or you won’t be able to do anything.




DARAGH

But I’m going to fail, man. I’ve never done that before.


MACK

We’ll just have to set out a study plan. It’ll be good for the both of us.

FADE MUSIC

(MACK’S MOTHER, MICHELLE GRENIERCOMES IN AND BRINGS THEM A LITTLE SNACK)

MICHELLE

Working hard? I thought you might want something to nibble on.


DARAGH

Yeah, thanks.


MICHELLE

What are you working on?

MACK

We have to write a poem for English

MICHELLE

Well, I’ll leave you to it then.

(SHE LEAVES. WHEN THE DOOR CLOSES MACK AND DARAGH BURST OUT LAUGHING)


DARAGH

Your mother’s a looker! Nice too. I bet you can talk to her about everything. (WISTFULLY) I bet she wouldn’t punish you if you failed.


MACK

(THROWING A PILLOW AT DARAGH AND LAUGHING) That’s because it won’t ever happen.


SCENE FOUR:

INT. CLASSROOM THURSDAY MORNING: 30 OR MORE STUDENTS ARE SETTLED IN FRONT OF MR. MANN, THE TEACHER.


MR.MANN

Now, each of you had an article on the ecology of our planet to read and report on. Daragh, would you like to begin?


DARAGH

I know this one man.

(MR. MANN COUGHS IN DISAPPROVAL)

DARAGH

There was this attack by giant jellyfish in Scotland. They just snuffed out everything.

(LAUGHTER OF STUDENTS)

MR. MANN

You’re partly right. They weren’t exactly giant but they were where they shouldn’t have been . Where were they from?


DARAGH

Mars?


(LAUGHTER OF STUDENTS)

MR. MANN

Mr. Pender. What world do you live in? They came from Southern California. And why were they a problem?


DARAGH

They were killing everyone in sight and taking over their minds.

(EVEN MORE UNPROARIOUS LAUGHTER)


MR MANN

Anyone with a more plausible explanation?

(A GIRL PUTS UP HER HAND)

MR. MANN

Yes. Lucy.


LUCY

They are killing the salmon farmed off the coast of Scotland by suffocation or stinging.


MR. MANN

Very good Lucy. Daragh, you will stay after school. We’ll see if more study will get you down to earth.

(LAUGHTER OF STUDENTS)

MR. MANN


Mack , what did you find out about the problems of the mountain gorilla?


(CU DARAGH, HE IS UPSET DESPITE THE CLOWNISH ATTITUDE)


MACK

I’m sorry, I can’t remember.


MR. MANN

(SURPRISED) Nothing?


MACK

Nothing.


MR. MANN

Well, Mr. Grenier. You can just accompany Mr. Pender after school until your memory comes back. Now Jules, how did you get on?



SCENE 5: EXT. THURSDAY AFTERNOON, SCHOOLYARD
GWEN, MARTHA AND LIZZIE RUSH OUT OF SCHOOL AND HEAD TOWARDS TOWN TO BUY THINGS FOR THE PARTY. LIZZIE IS ALWAYS AT HER PHONE. ALWAYS TEXTING.


LIZZIE

We’ll have to get some Tom and Gerry ice-cream.



MARTHA

And some chocolates.



GWEN

Mom’s making her Death By Chocolate cake.



LIZZIE MAKES NOISES AS IF SHE IS IN ECSTASY.


MARTHA


It wouldn’t be your birthday without that. MMMMM!



SCENE 6: INT. DEPARTMENT STORE, AFT.
LIZZIE, MARTHA AND GWEN ARE IN A DEPARTMENT STORE.. GWEN IS BEING MADE UP AT A MAKEUP COUNTER.


MALE MAKE-UP PERSON

With your skin, I would only put on the barest minimum of make-up, more as protection than anything else.

MARTHA


Do you want to look for clothes next or do you want to save the money your mother gave you?

GWEN

(WITH DIFFICULTY BECAUSE SHE WAS BEING MADE UP) What do you think? Spend, of course. I’ve had my eye on this outfit.


LIZZIE BUYS SOME MAKEUP AND FACIAL MASKS.
THEY GO UP TO THE CLOTHES DEPARTMENT

CUE MUSIC: THAT SMELLS LIKE TEEN SPIRIT BY NIRVANA

THE GIRLS TRYING ON CLOTHES AND MODELING THEM. FINALLY GWEN BUYS SOMETHING AND THE EXIT.

FADE MUSIC:


SCENE SEVEN: INTERIOR CLASSROOM THURSDAY AFTERNOON
MACK AND DARAGH ARE SITTING IN THE ROOM DOING EXTRA WORK...A TEACHER, MISS SHIRLEY MADDEN IS TALKING TO ANOTHER TEACHER, MISS SYLVIA BOURKE..


DARAGH

(WHISPERING) I know you knew the answer.

MACK SMILES


DARAGH

Thanks, I appreciate what you’re doing. But I’d feel bad if you went down the tube with me.


MACK

But you knew it all last night.


DARAGH

Lately I can’t seem to remember things. Don’t know what it is.

THE TEACHER GOES BACK TO HER DESK AND THE BOYS ARE SILENT FOR AWHILE.


MACK


I wrote a bit of the song for the competition.

DARAGH

That’s great. I knew you’d sing it.


MACK

No, I want a girl singer.


SCENE 8 INT. GWEN’S BEDROOM THURDAY NIGHT

GWEN (HUMMING A SONG) IS PUTTING AWAY THE NEW CLOTHES AND MAKEUP. SHE GETSB HER DIARY BUT DOES NOT WRITE RIGHT AWAY. SHE STARES MOODILY INTO SPACE, TAPS THE PEN AGAINST HER BOOK AND BEGINS TO WRITE.


SCENE 9: INT. SCHOOLROOM, FRIDAY MORNING

GENERAL CLASSROOM SCENE. MS. MADDEN IS AT HER DESK AT THE FRONT OF THE CLASS. STUDENTS ARE SEATED. LIZZIE AND MARTHA
GET UP AND WHISPER SOMETHING TO THE TEACHER. SHE STANDS UP.

MS. MADDEN

It is a special day for someone in this class. Could everyone stand up and sing a happy birthday to Gwen.

V/O STUDENTS SINGING HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO GWEN

MCU ON GWEN. SHE APPEARS EMBARRASSED BUT IS ENJOYING THE ATTENTION.


SCENE 10: EXT. SCHOOLYARD, FRIDAY AT LUNCHTIME

GWEN, LIZZIE AND MARTHA ARFE SITTING ON THE GRASS EATING THEIR LUNCH. MACK PASSES, SLOWS DOWN.

MACK

Hey, Gwen.

GWEN LOOKS UP.

MACK

Happy Birthday!

MACK SMILES AND CONTINUES ON HIS WAY.

GWEN SMILES BACK AND TRIES TO CONTROLHERSELF AS SHE FEELS FLUSHED AND FLUSTERED.

A MICROPHONE APPEARS OFF SIDE. THE THREE GIRLS WAVE THEIR ARMS FOR IT TO GO AWAY.

THEY GET UP AND GO BACK TO SCHOOL.


SCENE ELEVEN: INT. SCHOOL CORRIDOR.

SCHOOL IS FINISHED AND STUDENTSARE COMING OUT OF CLASSROOMS. GWEN IS HURRYING OUT FOLLOWED BY LIZZIE AND MARTHA.

GWEN

I have to go. My father is coming to town just so he can take me out to dinner. For my birthday.

MARTHA

That’s great, Gwen.

GWEN

Yeah, I haven’t seen him since they split up.

LIZZIE

When will we go over to your house tomorrow?

GWEN

About five. See you. I have to run.


LIZZIE’S PHONE RINGS AND SHE ANSWERS IT.


SCENE TWELVE: INT. GWEN’S BEDROOM

GWEN IS GETTING READY TO HAVE DINNER OUT WITH HER FATHER. SHE IS WEARING THE CLOTHES SHE BOUGHT WITH HER BIRTHDAY MONEY. SHE LOOKS IN THE MIRROR AS SHE DOES HER HAIR, PUTS ON MAKEUP AND JEWELRY AND SPRAYS ON PERFUME.

ROCK MUSIC IS PLAYING IN THE BACKGROUND ( CHERRY LIPS BY GARBAGE)

SOUND: CAR PULLING UP OUTSIDE, DOORBELL, A MALE AND FEMALE TALKING BUT TOOM INDISTINCT TO MAKE OUT THE WORDS.

V/O
TIFF (CALLING UPSTAIRS)

Gwen, you father’s here!



GWEN (CALLING DOWNSTAIRS)

Coming.


SCENE THIRTEEN: INT GWEN’S LIVING ROOM, FRIDAY NIGHT.
GWEN WALKS IN . HER FATHER AND MOTHER ARE SITTING THERE AWKWARDLY. HER FATHER STANDS UP. GWEN RUNS TO HIM AND GIVES HIM A BIG HUG.

GWEN

Dad!


JOE

Happy birthday Gwen. Look at you. You’re beautiful. You’re all grown up.

GWEN SMILES


JOE

We’d better be off. Our reservations are for eight.. The best restaurant in town.


TIFF WALKS THEM OUT TO THE FRONT DOOR, OPENS IT AND LETS THEM OUT.


TIFF

Have fun!


INT. MACK’S ROOM, FRIDAY NIGHT.

CUE MUSIC

MACK AND DARAGH AND LISTENING TO MUSIC PERHAPS GREEN DAY AND TRYING TO PLAY ALONG WITH IT. MACK HAS THE GUITAR AND DARAGH IS DRUMMING ON THE DESK.


DARAGH

(SINGING ALONG WITH THE CD) …and in the end, it really doesn’t matter

CUT MUSIC WHEN SONG ENDS

DARAGH

Are we good, or what? I think we should quit school and form a real rock band.


MACK

Perhaps we should be we have to finish school first.


DARAGH

That’s okay for you to say. You’re not failing.


MATT

You told me you did al-right on that last test.


DARAGH

I lied.

MATT

You just have to focus, Dare.


DARAGH

Yeah well, I think I’ll keep practicing the old music just in case.
You don’t have an old spell there for me?

MATT

The only spells I have , you have inside you too. You have to believe in yourself.


DARAGH

As I said before, easy for you…..(HE STARTS DRUMMING ON THE DESK AGAIN)

SCENE FIFTEEN: INT. FANCY RESTAURANT, FRIDAY NIGHT

GWEN IS HAPPY TO BE WITH HER DAD AND TO BE PAMPERED. BUT SHE HASN’T SEEN HIM IN A WHILE AND SHE FEELS SLIGHTLY AWKWARD AND SHY. THEY ARE BETWEEN THE MAIN COURSE AND DESSERT.

JOE:

So are you having a party for your birthday.


GWEN

Not exactly. Lizzie and Martha are coming over for a sleepover tomorrow.

JOE

Lizzie and Martha. So you’ve kept the same friends in Secondary School. That’s nice.

GWEN

We’re going to enter this band contest. I’m writing a song.

JOE

And what about a boyfriend? Anyone I should know about?

GWEN IS EMBARRASED AND OPENS HER MOUTH TO REPLY BUT JUST THEN A WAITER BRINGS IN A CAKE WITH SPARKLERS ON IT WHILE SINGING HAPPY BIRTHDAY.

WHEN THEY ARE EATING THEIR CAKE, HER FATHER PASSES HER A BEAUTIFULLY PACKAGED BOX.

JOE

Happy Birthday.


GWEN BEGINS TO UNWRAP IT. SHE OPENS THE BOX AND IS JUST PULLING THE TISSUE PAPER APART.


JOE

I didn’t know what to get you. Here’s a cheque to buy something you want.(HE PASSES HER AN ENVELOPE) I just wanted you to have something nice to open.



CU GWEN’S HANDS OPENING THE TISSUE PAPER TO REVEAL SOMETHING RED AND LACEY. SHE HOLDS UP A LONG TRANSPARENT RED
NEGLIGEE.

HER MOUTH FALLS OPEN. SHE IS EMBARRASSED BUT PRETENDS TO LIKE IT.

GWEN

It, It’s beautiful.


JOE

(NOT NOTICINGHOW INAPPROPRIATE IT IS) I’m glad you like it. I mean you are growing up. I didn’t know what to get you.

GWEN

I love it.


SCENE SIXTEEN: INT. MACK’S BEDROOM. MACK AND DARAGH ARE READING MAGAZINES AND JAPANESE STYLE COMICS.


DARAGH

Were you serious about getting a girl singer?


MACK

Yeah, I was thinking of one of the first year girls.


DARAGH

That Martha has a lovely voice. I heard her in the choir.


MACK

Yeah, but she isn’t exactly the image I want to portray with the band. She’s a bit plain.


DARAGH

With a little makeup and the right clothes, she would be lovely.

MACK

I was thinking more of Gwen. She can sing. And she has sex appeal.

DARAGH

If that’s what you want, why don’t you get that other one, that Lizzie. She can’t sing a note. But she’s a slut.

MACK

How do you know, Dare?

DARAGH

Everyone knows.

MACK

What’s she done, then ?

DARAGH

Okay Mack. So I don’t know much about sex. There. Does that make you feel good?

MACK

Hold on. I’m not making fun of you. I had to piece things together for myself. Here. This is my journal. I’ve written down everything about sex that I know. You can borrow it.

DARAGH LEAFS THROUGH THE NOTEBOOK.

DARAGH

Wow, those are great drawings of zombie! Look – and Satanist rituals.


MACK


Yeah, don’t lose it.. I put everything in it. I have part of a science fiction story there. Half-written songs. It is my life.


DARAGH

It must be hard to get copies of those rituals.



MACK


I made them up. That’s why that book is so special. I couldn’t dream up all that again.



SCENE EIGHTEEN: INT. GWEN’S ROOM, FRIDAY NIGHT
SHE TAKES THE NIGHTGOWN OUT OF THE BOX. SHE HIDES IT AT THE BACK OF HER CLOSET AND GETS INTO BED WITH PAJAMAS ON.


SCENE NINETEEN: INT. GWEN’S HOUSE, SATURDAY LATE AFTERNOON

CUE MUSIC BLINK 182, DAMMIT

INT. KITCHEN, MOTHER BAKING A CAKE, GWEN PUTTING AWAY PROVISIONS FOR THE SLEEEPOVER

INT. LIVING ROOM, MOTHER IS HOOVERING

INT. GWEN’S BEDROOM GWEN IS PUTTING HER HAIR IN A PONY TAIL, PUTTING ON EARRINGS AND PUTTING ON HER SHOES

INT. BATHROOM, GWEN IS CLEANING THE SINK AND ARRANGING NEW TOWELS

SOUND: DOORBELL

GWEN RUNS TO OPEN DOOR

FADE MUSIC

LIZZIE AND MARTHA COME IN.


SCENE TWENTY: INT. GWEN’S KITCHEN, SATURDAY NIGHT

DIRTY PLATESARE PILED BY THE SINK. THERE IS A PIZZA BOX WITH A FEW COLD SLICES IN IT ON THE COUNTER. THE THREE GIRLS ARE SEATED AROUND THE TABLE FINISHING A SLICE OF CHOCOLATE CAKE. GWEN’S MOTHER IS FILLING A TRAY WITH CAKE FOR TWO, A BOTTLE OF WINE AND TWO GLASSES.

TIFF

I’m going in to watch a video with Winn You know where I am if you need me.


MARTHA

Thanks Mrs. Walsh. The cake was great.

LIZZIE

Yeah, it was great.

GWEN SMILES.


SCENE TWENTY-ONE INT. GWEN’S BEDROOM.

THE GIRLS LIGHT CANDLES. MARTHA HANDS A PRESENT TO GWEN.

MARTHA

You’re so lucky. My father says that no-one has a party after twelve. What he means is that he didn’t get a party after 12, so no-one else will either.


GWEN

This is not exactly a party. Thanks for this.


GWEN OPENS THE PRESENT. IT IS A CD. SHE PUTS IT ON.

CUE MUSIC GREEN DAY, PROSTHETIC HEAD

LIZZIE

(GIVING GWEN A PRESENT) You are going to love this.

GWEN OPENS THE PRESENT. IT IS A BOOK

CU TITLE

V/O LIZZIE

Poems Erotica, fifty erotic poems to set you tingling!

THE THREE GIRLS LAUGH. GWEN OPENS THE BOOK AND READS A PAGE.

GWEN

Listen to this. “Let me be the breeze that licks your unopened eyes.”

THE GIRLS FALL DOWN WITH LAUGHTER.


LIZZIE

(Reaching into her bag) Speaking of love, are we going to do this love spell I found, or what?

M ARTHA

It can’t hurt.

LIZZIE TAKES ABOOK AND A SMALL POUCH OUT OF HER OVERNIGHT BAG.
SHE HAND THE BOOK TO MARTHA.

LIZZIE

Find the love one.


FADE MUSIC

LIZZIE OPENS THE POUCH TO SHOW AN INCENSE BURNER, A KNIFE AND INCENSE.


MARTHA

It says here to write the name of the one you love on a piece of paper. Say these words over it. Then burn it.

GWEN

What’s the knife for?

LIZZIE

Protection from evil spirits.

MARTHA

Come on Lizzie. It’s just a love charm. Don’t scare me.

LIZZIE

I’m serious. All the books say it is a good idea to have a knife to keep you safe. I don’t know what you do with it but….

GWEN

I don’t really have anyone I want to do a love spell on.

LIZZIE IS PASSING OUT PAPER AND PENCILS AND IS LIGHTING A CONE OF INCENSE.

LIZZIE

Lighten up. It’s just for fun.

THEY EACH WRITE A NAME ON A PAPER WITHOUT SHOWING IT TO EACH OTHER. THEY READ A SPELL TOGETHER AND THROW THE PAPERS ON THE INCENSE AND WATCH THEM BURN.

V/O LIZZIE, GWEN, MARTHA


VENUS SHINING IN THE NIGHT
BLESS MY HEART WITH LOVE AND LIGHT.

LOVED IN TRUTH I WISH TO BE,
LISTEN TO MY PRAYER, MY PLEA.

MAY I LOVE AND BE LOVED TOO,
BLESSED BE THE LOVE THAT’S TRUE.

AND IT HARM NO-ONE SO BE IT.



A NOISE COMES FROM MARTHA’S MOBILE PHONE. SHE LOOKS AT IT.

LIZZIE

So Gwen, whose name did you write?


GWEN

None of your business.


MARTHA

(LOOKING AT PHONE) I just got a text from Patrick, that idiot. I hope that’s not because of the spell.


THEY COLLAPSE IN LAUGHTER AND START TEXTING OTHER PEOPLE. THEN THEY TRY ON CLOSE AND DO EACH OTHER’S HAIR AND MAKEUP. LIZZIE IS RUTING AROUND IN GWEN’S CLOSET. SHE FNDS THE NIGHTGOWN.


LIZZIE

Whooo! Gwen. I have to try this on.



GWEN

Careful. It’s my mother’s. I was just trying it on.


LIZZIE TRIES IT ON AND ACTS THE VAMP. MARTHA AND GWEN LAUGH BUT THEN GWEN FEELS UNCOMFORTABLE.


GWEN

That’s enough Lizzie. Take it off now.



SCENE TWENTY-TWO: EXT. THE DOOR TO GWEN’S HOUSE, SUNDAY MORNING. MARTHA AND LIZZIE ARE LEAVING GWEN’S HOUSE. MACK PASSES THE HOUSE ON THE WAY INTO THE FIELDS BEHIND THE TOWN.


SCENE TWENTY-THREE: EXT. MAIN STREET, THE CITY, SUNDAY MORNING

GWEN IS DOING HER VOLUNTEER WORK WITH THE HOMELESS. A VAN IS PARKED ON THE SIDE OF THE ROAD. THE SIDE DOOR IS SLID OPEN. THE VAN CONTAINS SUPPLIES OF BLANKETS, TOILETERIES AND FOOD. GWEN IS TAKING THEM TO SHAPELESS BUNDLES OF PEOPLE LYING IN THE PAVEMENT.

SCENE TWENTY-FOUR: EXT STREET, SUNDAY MORNING, A HOMELESS MAN IS RAVING ON THE STREET.


HOMELESS MAN

Beware the evils of Satan. Don’t let yourself be tricked.


SCENE TWENTY-FIVE: EXT. FIELD WITH WOODS IN THE BG, SUNDAY AFTERNOON. GWEN IS GOING FOR A WALK. SHE RUNS INTO MACK.


GWEN

What are you doing here?


MACK

What do you mean. It’s a free country.


GWEN

It just seems to me that enjoying Nature is a strange thing for a Devil Worshipper to do.


MACK

There are many parts to me. And what about you? The do-gooder.

HE GIVES HER A TEASING PUSH.


MACK

Did you see that ad about the bans?


GWEN

Yeah, I’m working on a song.


MACK

It would be good to have a mixed band. I play the guitar. Daragh plays drums and we’d like to have a girl singer.


GWEN

Whose song would you do?


MACK

Whichever ‘s best. I mean, I am writing a song too but if yours sounds better, I’m on for it.

GWEN

But I had planned to go in with Martha and Lizzie.


MACK

They can be back up singers. You don’t play any instruments.

GWEN

I play tin whistle.

MACK

Yeah right, tin whistle. You’re really going to win playing that.

GWEN

I’ll think about it. But now I’m late I have to go.

SHE BREAKS IN TO A RUN AND GOES AWAY.

MONTAGE SEQUENCE: SCENES 26-30

CUE MUSIC OFFSPRING, THE KIDS AREN’T ALRGHT

INT. GWEN’S BEDROOM, SUNDAY NIGHT: GWEN IS READING HER NEW POETRY BOOK.

INT. DARAGH’S BEDROOM, SUNDAY NIGHT: HE IS LOOKING THROUGH MACK’S JOURNAL.

INT. MACK’S BEDROOM, SUNDAY NIGHT, HE IS STUDYING

INT. MARTHA’S BEDROOM, SUNDAY NIGHT: SHE IS BEING BEATEN AND YELLED AT BECAUSE HER PARENTS FOUND HER WITH MAKEUP ON. THEY CALL HER A TART.

INT. LIZZIE’S HOUSE, SUNDAY NIGHT. LIZZIE IS TRYING O TELL HER PARENTS ABOUT THE BAND. THEY ARE IGNORING HER.

END MUSIC

SCENE THIRTY-ONE INT. GWEN’S BEDROOM, SUNDAY NIGHT

SHE LIKES THE POEMS SHE GOT FOR HER BIRTHDAY AND THE IMAGES IN THEM. SHE STARTS WRITING SOME OF THE SAME THEMES IN THE FORM OF A SONG ALTHOUGH SHE DOES NOT UNDERSTAND THEM. IT DEALS WITH THE LOSS OF INNOCENSE. SHE PUTS THE BOOK AWAY IN THE DRAWER.SHE IS FINISHING HER SONG IN BED. SHE GETS TIRED AND LEAVES IT ON HER BEDSIDE TABLE AND TURNS OFF THE LIGHT.

SCENE THIRTY-TWO INT. TEACHER’S ROOM AT SCHOOL, MONDAY MORNING

DARAGH COMES TO THE DOOR TO ASK SOMETHING. HE NOTICES THERE IS NO ONE THERE. HE LOOKS AROUND AND SNEAKS IN.HE GOES OVER TO A FILING CABINET AND LOOKS FOR HE RECORD. HE STARTS READING IT BUT HEARS A NOISE AND PUTS IT AWAY QUICKLY. HE GOES OUT.

SCENE THIRTY-THREE INT. GWEN’S HOUSE, MONDAY AFTERNOON.

GWEN COMES HOME FROM SCHOOL TO BE CONFRONTED BY HER MOTHER WHO IS HOLDING THE PIECE OF PAPER THE POEM IS WRITTEN ON.
TIFF

(ANGRILY) What’s this?



GWEN

(DEFENSIVELY) Where did you get that?


TIFF


You know damn well where I got it?


GWEN


What were you doing in my room?


TIFF

I don’t need an excuse to go in. You left your phone and it was ringing. I thought it may have been you.
(SIGHING) That’s not the point. The point is this.


GWEN

That’s private.


TIFF

(STERNLY)Who are you writing to?

GWEN

That’s none of your business.

TIFF

(HOLDING THE PAPER UP AND READING FROM IT) “My innocence slipped through your fingers like Spring breezes.” That is my business. Who is this guy and how long have you been seeing him?

GWEN

Wouldn’t you like to know!


TIFF

Don’t you dare speak to me like that, you little whore.

SHE SLAPS GWEN HARD ON THE FACE.

CU GWEN’S FACE, REACTION OF HORROR AND HURT

TIFF

Oh my God, Gwen. I’m sorry. I’m sorry.



SCENE THIRTY-FOUR EXT. GWEN’S STREET, MONDAY LATE AFTERNOON

CUE MUSIC: RED HOT CHILI PEPPERS, GIVE IT WAY

GWEN COMES OUT OF THE HOUSE RUNNING. SHE IS ANGRY AND HURT.

CU GWEN’S FACE, A TEAR ROLLS DOWN


SCENE THIRTY-FIVE: EXT. GWEN’S STREET,

MACK SEES GWEN RUN PAST HIM, THROUGH THE FIELDS AND INTO THE WOODS. HE GOES AFTER HER.

SCENE THIRTY-SIX: EXT. WOODS

(SILENT, WE HEAR NO WORDS, ONLY THE PRODIGY)GWEN IS TRYING TO TALK BUT IS VERY EMOTIONAL. MACK IS TRYING TO COMFORT HER. HE HUGS HER. THEY FEEL A SPARK BETWEEN THEM. IT BEGINS TO RAIN HEAVILY. MACK POINTS TO A GARDENER’S SHED. THEY RUN TO IT, GO IN AND SLAM THE DOOR.

SCENE THIRTY-SEVEN; EXT. WOODS

A DROP IS DRIPPING SLOWLY DOWN A TREE

IT FINALLY DROPS OFF THE TREE AND LANDS NOISILY IN A PUDDLE.

CUT MUSIC

SCENE THIRTY-EIGHT: INT.GWEN’S HOUSE, MONDAY NIGHT

GWEN WALKS IN THE DOOR. HER MOTHER RUSHED OUT FROM THE LIVING ROOM.



TIFF

Gwen, I…….

GWEN WALKS PAST HER MOTHER AS IF SHE DIDN’T SEE HER. SHE GOES INTO HER ROOM AND SLAMS THE DOOR. SHE SEES THE SONG IS BACK ON HER BEDSIDE TABLE AGAIN. SHE PICKS IT IS, CRUMPLES IT AND THROWS IT IN THE WASTEPAPER BASKET. BUT YOU CAN SEE THAT SHE IS HAPPY WHEN A SLIGHT SMILE APPEARS ON HER LIPS.


SCENE THIRTY-NINE INT. GWEN’S HOUSE, UPSTAIRS

GWEN IS IN HER BEDROOM. SHE OPENS THE DOOR OF HER BEDROOM AND GOES TO THE BATHROOM WHERE SHE RUNS A BATH WITH LOTS OF BUBBLE. SHE HEARS HER MOTHER CRYING DOWNSTAIRS.


SCENE FORTY; INT. GWEN’S HOUSE, ON THE STAIRS

GWEN IS COMING DOWN THE STAIRS WEARING PAJAMAS WITH A TOWEL WRAPPED AROUND HER HEAD


SCENE FORTY-ONE: INT. GWEN’S LIVING ROOM

GWEN’S MOTHER, TIFF IS SITTING ON THE SOFA CRYING WITH HIS FACE IN HIS HANDS. GWEN MOVES TO CONFORT HER. HER MOTHER TRIES TO SHOO HER AWAY


TIFF

Leave me be, Gwen. I don’t want you to see me like this.

GWEN ST DOWN ON THE SOFA.


TIFF

(SOBBING) I don’t want to be the child.


GWEN

What do you mean?


TIFF

I was always the strong one in my family. My father was away . Your grandmother couldn’t cope . I had to grow up quickly. She was the child. I don’t want to be the child. I want to be strong for you.

GWEN

(HUGGING HER) You are strong for me.

TIFF

(BLOWING HER NOSE) I try. But lately just feel like I’ve been blowing it lately. I miss your father. And you are growing up. Soon you’ll be gong your own way.

GWEN

I’m not going anywhere for awhile.

TIFF

(PULLING HERSELF TOGETHER) I’m sorry for hitting you Gwen. I just don’t want you to mess up your life.

GWEN

I’m not messing up my life.


TIFF

I know. But I to be sure that you know you can come to me with anything.


GWEN NODS HER HEAD BUT YOU CAN TELL BY THE TENSION, HER STIFF BODY LANGUAGE, AND FACAL EXPRESSION THAT IT S TOO LATE FOR THAT. IT WILL NEVER HAPPEN.


SCENE FORTY-FOUR: EXT. MACK’S STREET, MORNING

A MOVING TRUCK PULLS UP NEXT DOOR. MEN START MOVING IN BOXES AND FURNITURE.


MACK IS LOOKING AT THE SCENE FROM HIS POINT OF VIEW.

MAC’S POINT OF VIEW: CAR DRIVE UP AND YOUNG COUPLE DRIVE UP. THEY ARE EXCITED ABOUT MOVING IN. THEY JOIN HANDS AND WALK IN THE HOUSE TOGTHER.




SCENE FORTY-FIVE: INT HALL OR GARAGE, AFTERNOON

GWEN IS SINGING WITH A MICROPHONE. MARTHA AND LIZZE ARE ON BACKUP. MACK IS ON GUITAR. (COMMISSIONED SONG TO BE ADDED LATER. THIS IS MACK’S SONG – A BIT HEAVY) THEY FINISH THE SONG.


MACK

So, what do you think?


GWEN

It’s great!

MACK

It would have been better with drums.

MARTHA

Where is Daragh anyway?

MACK

I don’t know. He was supposed to be here.
Has anybody got any credit? We should phone him.

LIZZIE

What’s his number ?

MACK

085- 5986232

LIZZIE

(INTO THE PHONE) Daragh, this is Lizzie. Did you forget that we had practice for the group? Call me back. (TO EVERYONE ELSE) He has his phone off.

MACK

Okay, let’s try Gwen’s song now.


EVERYONE GETS BACK IN “BAND” POSITION. GWEN STARTS SINGING A SLOWER SONG (COMMISSIONED- TO ADD LATER) GWEN FINISHES AND THEY ALL CLAP.



LIZZIE

We were great. We have a real chance.


MACK

That was a cool song.


LIZZIE

It’s a love song.


(MACK AND GWEN LOOK AT EACH OTHER AND BLUSH.)


GWEN

We have to decide which song to go with.

MARTHA

I like them both.

GWEN

Yeah, but perhaps we’d do better with a faster song.

LIZZIE

It might look better. Martha and I could dance to it and Mack can move around with the guitar more.

MACK

We’ll practice both. We can do mine at the contest and if we get to the next level, we will have another song up our sleeves.

LIZZIE

What do you mean, if we get through…….

DARAGH RUSHES IN LOOKING FLUSTERED.

MARTHA

The music wasn’t the same without the drums.

MACK

Yeah, where were you?
DARAGH

(PREOCCUPIED )I forgot.

MACK

(ANGRY)This is serious. If we want to have a chance, we have to take it seriously.

GWEN

(TRYING TO BE THE PEACEMAKER) Mack’s song is going to get us to the finals.

CU DARAGH, NO OBVIOUS REACTION.

MACK

We’ll do the songs again.

DARAGH SITS BEHND THE DRUM KIT. THEY START THE SONG. FOCIS IN DARAGH WHO IS JUST GOING THROUGH THE MOTIONS. HE HAS VERY LITTLE EXPRESSION ON HS FACE

SCENE FORTY-SIX: EXT. GARAGE OR HALL, AFTERNOON

THEY ALL START WALKING OUT OF THE GARAGE

CU PHOTOGRAPHIC CAMERA ON TRIPOD.

SOUND SHUTTER CLICKING OVER VISUALS OF THEM WALKING

MARTHA

(TO SOMEONE WE CAN’T SEE) Why can’t you leave me alone?

MACK

(ANGRILY) Get out of here.


SCENE FORTY- SEVEN: EXT. MACK’S STREET, RAINY NIGHT

FIGURE IN HOODED RAINCOAT RUNNING UP TO MACK’S DOOR. MACK’S MOTHER, MICHELLE OPENS IT. THE FIGURE GOES IN.


SCENE FORTY-EIGHT: INT. MACK’S KITCHEN., NIGHT

THE FIGURE TAKE OFF THE COAT. IT IS KELLY HAMMER WHO JUST MOVED IN NEXT DOOR. SHE SITS DOWN AT THE TABLE. A MAN IS ALREADY SITTING THERE. HE IS JOSEPH CONNEELY, MICHELLES COUSIN, A BACHELOR WHO LIVES AND FISHES IN CONNEMARA. HE GETS UP AND TELLS MICHELLE.

MUSIC FROM RADIO: JINGLE “YOU’RE A STAR” MICHELLE TURNS IT OFF.




JOSEPH

I’ll have a quick lie-down before I set off on the road.

MICHELLE

Keep in mind what we talked about. About Mack working for you next summer.

JOSEPH

Sure, there’s nothing more to talk about. He’s welcome any time.


HE LEAVES

KELLY


I hope I’m not intruding at a bad time.


MICHELLE

My cousin was just up for the day from Connemara. Joseph’s a fisherman. It’s a long enough drive so he’s off for a sleep.

KELLY

It’s good of you to let me wait here.


MICHELLE

(MAKING TEA) I’m always forgetting my keys. I’m sure I’ll be over to you with the same problem.

KELLY

Kevin should be home soon.

MICHELLE

(SITTING DOWN AND POURING THE TEA) So how do you like it here?

KELLY

It’s great here. Kevin loves his job at the paper and I’m looking around for something.

MICHELLE

No children ?

KELLY

(HER FACE CLOUDS) I can’t.

MICHELLE

(AWKWARD) Oh, I’m so sorry.

KELLY

No, it’s okay. That’s part of the reason we moved here. We have our name down for adoption and we thought this would be a good place to bring up a kid.

MICHELLE

Everywhere’s the same. It’s hard. But it‘s good here.


SOUND MACK COMING IN THE FRONT DOOR. THEN INTO THE KITCHEN.


MICHELLE


Hi, Mack. This is Kelly, our new next door neighbour.

KELLY AND MACK LOOK AT EACH OTHER.


MACK

I saw you move in.


KELLY

I locked myself out. (SHRUGGNG) Is that a good first impression, or what?

MACK LAUGHS.

SOUND: CAR PULLNG UP OUTSDE

KELLY

I bet that’s Kevin. I’d better go.


MACK

It’s lashing rain. I’ll go out and make sure it’s him. I’ll tell him you’re here.

MACK LEAVES.

KELLY

He’s such a nice boy. You must be very proud.


MICHELLE

I am. Although I can’t say I understand the constant black t-shirts, the tattoos and piercing. (SIGHS) Still he does well in school and seems to have friends.




SCENE FORTY-NINE EXT. OUTSIDE MACK’S HOUSE


MACK RUNS OUT N THE RAIN. MEETS KEVIN AS HE IS GETTING OUT OF THE CAR.

MACK

You’re wife is at my house. Locked herself out. I came out to get you.


KEVIN

Thanks. I’ll follow you in. It’s Mack, isn’t it? I’m Kevin.

MACK

Yeah, I know.


KEVIN

Did you see the match last night?


MACK

Yeah, it was brilliant.


SCENE FIFTY INT; KITCHEN MACK’S HOUSE, NIGHT

MACK, MICHELLE, KELLY AND KEVIN ARE SITTING AROUND WITH EMPTY COFFEE CUPS TO SHOW PASSAGE OF TIME. KEVIN GETS UP.

KEVIN

Well we must be going.

KELLY

Thanks, you are lifesavers.


MICHELLE AND MACK WAVE FOLLOW THEM OUT TO THE DOOR AND WAVE.


SCENE FIFTY-ONE EXT: STREET,, AFTERNOON

MACK IS WALKING AND DARAGH PULLS UP IN THE BIKE

DARAGH

Do you want to get together and study for that test tonight ?

MACK


Maybe later. We have band practice.


DARAGH

You never have time anymore. You are always with her.

MACK

You’re in the band too. Remember?
That’s when you bother showing up.


DARAGH

Well, I have to study. I want to pass this year.


MACK

Chill. You’ll do okay. And if we win the band slam……… It’s this week-end. Be sure to make it man.

CU DARAGH. HE IS TOTALLY FED UP. HE FEELS HE IS NOT GETTING THROUGH TO MACK.

SCENE FIFTY TWO: INT. GWEN’S KITCHEN,

GWEN GIVES HER MOTHER A PECK ON THE CHEEK.

GWEN


Bye, Mom.


TIFF


Will you be home after school?


GWEN


I have band practise.



TIFF


Right, the boys in black.



GWEN


And girl. Martha and Lizzie are in it too.
Bye.

TIFF WAVES CASUALLY AND GWEN LEAVES.


SCENE FIFTY-THREE INT. SCHOOL CLASSROOM., MACK AND DARAGH’S CLASS

THE CLASS IS TAKING AN EXAM. ALL IS SILENT.

ANGLE ON MACK WRITING AWAY.

ANGLE ON DARAGH AS HE SEEMS STUMPED BY A QUESTION



SCENE FIFTY- FOUR INT. BACKSTAGE BATTLE OF THE BANDS

THE GROUP, ALL DRESSED UP, IS NERVOUS AND SELF-CONSCIOUS WHEN THEY SEE HOW GOOD ALL THE OTHER BANDS ARE.

MARTHA

(GOING OVER TO DARAGH) Everyone is so good.


DARAGH

Yeah. I wish we didn’t have to wait so long.

MACK

Just keep cool. Our song is good. We are good. We have a good chance.


GWEN GETS THE HICCUPS.

MARTHA

(PUTTING HER ARM AROUND GWEN) Take a deep breath. You’ll be fine.


LIZZIE

(
(TEASING) Maybe Mack should ask the Devil to help us.

MACK

(TEASING BACK) I already have.

MARTHA

You shouldn’t even joke about something like that. Bad things can happen.

MACK

But Martha , that’s our image.

MARTHA

That may be your image. But if that’s what kind of band it is, I want no part of it.


GWEN

(RECOVERED FROM HICCUPS) It’s all show, Martha. We’re just putting on a good show. We’re not Satanists. Mack isn’t really either.

LIZZIE

What do you think Daragh?

DARAGH

Whatever!

GWEN

We’re up after this. It’s a little late to discuss our image. Let’s just do our best. Let’s rock.

SCENE FIFTY-FIVE: INT ON STAGE, BATTLE OF THE BANDS, NIGHT

THE GROUP PERFORM’S MACKS SONG. THEY HAVE CHARISMA. THEY ARE GREAT.

SCENE FIFTY-SIX: INT. BEHIND THE STAGE, BATTLE OF THE BANDS, NIGHT

THEY ARE WAITING TO SEE IF THEY GOT THROUGH TO THE FINALS. THEIR NAME, DARK AWAKENING, IS CALLED. THEY ARE IN THE FINALS. THEY CHEER. MARTHA HUGS DARAGH. LIZZIE LOOKS JEALOUS. MACK AND GWEN ARE HOLDING HANDS AND SWINGING THEIR JOINED ARMS TO MUSIC.

SCENE FIFTY-SEVEN: EXT. OUTSIDE MACK’S HOUSE., DAYTIME

MACK SEES KEVIN KICKING ROUND A FOOTBALL IN HIS FRONT GARDEN.
HE GOES OVER AND JOINS HIM. THEY PLAY FOR A GOOD WHILE AND APPEAR TO ENJOY EACH OTHER’S COMPANY.


SCENE FIFTY-EIGHT: INT. DARAGH’S HOUSE, EVENING

MR. MICKEY PENDER IS READING THE NEWSPAPER IN THE LIVING ROOM.
DARAGH COMES IN.

MICKEY

How are ya? You aren’t home much lately.

DARAGH

No, we’re practicing for this band thing. We have a good chance.

MICKEY

It’s fine to have fun and go cavorting with girls. But don’t forget your studies. They are the only road to the future.

DARAGH

(GOING ON AUTOMATIC) Yeah, Yeah!

MICKEY

Don’t take that tone with me. I’ve worked hard to make sure you’ve got a good education.

DARAGH

I know that Dad.

MICKEY

I’m just saying that you’ll have to do well n school because I want you to get a job this summer. To help out like.

DARAGH

(LISTLESSLY) I’ll do ok Dad.

HE LEAVES AND GOES UP TO HIS ROOM.




SCENE FIFTY-NINE: INT. MARTHA’S HOUSE, NIGHT

MARTHA WALKS INTO THE LIVING ROOM WHERE HER PARENT ARE SITTING WATCHING TELEVISION. SHE HAS A PILE OF PHOTOS N HER HAND.

MARTHA

He’s been doing it again. He’s been spying on me. And worse, he’s been spying on my friends.

MRS. FALLON

He’s only looking out for your best interests.

MR. FALLON

It’s not his fault that you are hanging out with a wild crowd.

MRS. FALLON

Especially that Gwen. I always thought she was such a nice girl. And now?

MARTHA

(EXASPERATED) Just tell him to leave me and my friends alone.



MR. FALLON

You stay away from those friends and you won’t have a problem.

MARTHA

He’s sick.

MRS. FALLON

He’s a good boy.

MARTHA

He’s a peeper, Ma. I’ve seen him look at women through windows. I’ve seen him take underclothes off Nurse Wall’s clothesline.


MR. FALLON

Watch you tongue, young lady.


MARTHA SLAMS THE DOOR AND LEAVES.



SCENE SIXTY: INT. DARAGH’S BEDROOM, NIGHT.

DARAGH CAN’T SLEEP, READS A BIT OF MACK’S NOTEBOOK. THEN GETS UP AND PACES.


SCENE SIXTY-ONE : INT. GWEN’S HOUSE, MORNING

GWEN S IN HER BEDROOM. SHE RUSHES INTO THE TOILET TO BE SICK.



SCENE SIXTY-TWO, INT. DARAGH AND MACK’S CLASSROOM, DAY

WS STUDENTS - BY ACTIONS OF THE STUDENTS IT IS OBVIOUS THAT CLASSES ARE GOING TO SOON END FOR THE DAY. THEY ARE RESTLESS. CLOSE BOOKS, LOOK AT WATCHES AND PHONES.

CUT TO MR. MANN STANDING AT THE FRONT OF THE CLASS.

MR. MANN

Tomorrow, I’ll give you the results of your tests. I want them signed and brought back to me by next Friday

BELL RINGS STUDENTS RUSH OUT OF CLASS. ANGLE ON MACK AND DARAGH

SCENE SIXTY-THREE EXT. SCHOOLYARD, AFTERNOON


DARAGH AND MACK ARE STANDING IN FRONT OF THE STEPS. MACK IS LOOKING AROUND.

DARAGH

I’m dead.


MACK

What do you mean?

DARAGH

I just know I’ve failed.

MACK


Relax. You were doing okay.


DARAGH

I don’t know. What are you doing now? Do you want to hang out?


MACK

I can’t. I promised Gwen we’d go over her song.


DARAGH

I didn’t know there was a band practice.


MACK

It’s not.

DARAGH


(REALIZING THEY JUST WANT TO BE ALONE) Oh!


CUT TO GWEN AND MARTHA WALKING DOWN THE STEPS.

MACK


There she is. (WHILE MOVING AWAY) Why don’t you come over tonight and we’ll hang?


CUT TO TWO GIRLS GWEN SPOTS MACK AND SMILES. MARTHA LOOKS AT DARAGH IN THE DISTANCE AND THEN OVER TO MACK. SHE FROWNS, WHEN THE TWO GIRLS GET LEVEL WITH MACK, MARTHA WALKS OFF. SHE WALKS PAST DARAGH AND SAYS HELLO BUT HE IS PREOCCUPIED AND DOESN’T ANSWER.







SCENE SIXTY-FOUR EXT. AT MACK’S DOOR, EVENING


MR. JAMES GRENIER ANSWERS THE DOOR. HE IS A SERIOUS MAN WHO HAS LITTLE TIME FOR SMALL TALK.
HE SEES DARAGH
DARAGH

Is Mack in?


JAMES

I don’t think so. Although he could be buried up in
that room of his. He spends and inordinate amount of time up there.

JAMES

(CALLING UPSTAIRS) MACK!

(LISTENS FOR A MINUTE) I don’t hear music upstairs. He must be out.

DARAGH IS DISAPPOINTED AND DISTRESSED.

DARAGH

Then is his mother in? Your wife? Michelle?

JAMES

No, she has an art class on Wednesday s. I heat up my dinner in the microwave.

DARAGH BECOMES VERY AGITATED.

DARAGH

(SHOUTS) Well when are they coming home?


JAMES

(LOOKING CONCERNED) Are you al-right son?

DARAGH

I’ll come back.



JAMES


Daragh, isn’t it? I was sorry to hear about your mother.

DARAGH

I have to go. Tell Mack I called.


SCENE SIXTY-FIVE INT. GARAGE , NIGHT

MACK IS LYNG AND GWEN IS SITTNG ON A BLANKET ON THE FLOOR. AROUND THEM IS FOOD AND DRINK AS FOR A PICNIC AND A SMALL CANDLE IS IN THE MIDDLE.


GWEN

I used to hate it when my mother worked late.


MACK

I know. When my mother started art class, I just hated heating my dinner up n the microwave.

GWEN

(PLAYFULLY) Things change.

MACK

They do.

THEY KISS.


SCENE SIXTY-SIX EXT. FIELD THAT LEADS TO THE WOODS, NIGHT


DARAGH IS WALKING THROUGH THE FIELD CARRYING A BAG. HIS HEAD IS DOWN AND HIS SHOULDERS ARE SLUMPED. LIZZIE HAS SPOTTED HIM AND THINKS, WITH MARTHA NOT THERE, THIS MIGHT BE THE TIME TO MAKE A PLAY FOR HIM. SHE DOESN’T KNOW IF HE LIKES MARTHA BUT SHE KNOWS MARTHA STAKED A CLAIM ON HIM AMONGST THE GIRLS. SHE KNOWS THAT SHE MAY BE BETRAYING HER FRIEND’S TRUST BY GONG AFTER HIM BUT SHE IS VERY ATTRACTED. SHE IS REALLY QUITE INNOCENT DESPITE HER REPUTRATION. SHE FLIRTS FOR ATTENTION AND USES BAD LANGUAGE BUT HAS NEVER HAD ANY EXPERIENCE HERSELF. SHE RUNS AFTER HIM. DARAGH NEEDS SOMEONE TO TALK TO BUT WON’T TALK TO LIZZIE. PERHAPS BECAUSE HE DOESN’T TAKE HER SERIOUSLY OR BECAUSE IT IS NOW TOO LATE FOR TALK. HE HAS BEEN DEPRESSED FOR QUITE AWHILE NOW AND HAS BEEN FIGHTING TO STAY ON TOP. HIS CONDITION IS THE CAUSE OF HIS MARKS SLIPPING. THERE ARE NO REAL REASONS FOR HIS CONDITION. IT JUST CAME. IT IS TRUE THAT HIS MOTHER DIED AND HE SOMEHOW LOST SELF-CONFIDENCE AND DIDN’T FEEL ATTRACTIVE TO GIRLS BUT THIS WAS NOT THE ROOT. CHEMICAL? I DON’T KNOW.


LIZZIE

Daragh, wait!

HE KEEPS WALKING AS SHE STRUGGLES TO REACH HIM. SHE CATCHES UP


LIZZIE

Daragh, where are you going?


DARAGH

What do you want, Lizzie?



LIZZIE


I just thought if you weren’t doing anything, I could come along.


DARAGH

That doesn’t make sense.


LIZZIE

(FLIRTING) You know what I mean.


DARAGH

I’m going in the woods. You can come if you want. It’s your own business.


LIZZIE FOLLOWS HIM INTO THE WOODS.



SCENE SIXTY-SEVEN , EXT. WOODS, NIGHT

IT IS SPRING AND LEAVES ARE APPEARNING ON THE TREES. PRIMROSES AND LILIES-OF-THE VALLEY ARE POKING OUT FROM UNDER FOLLIAGE. WE CAN SEE THIS BY THE LIGHT OF A FLASHLIGHT.

FLASHLIGHT SHINES ON PERSON HOLDING IT’S FOOT.

ANGLE ON FOOT FROM FRONT PERPSCTIVE. ZOOM OUT TO SHOW KEN WITH THE FLSHLIGHT IN ONE HAND AND A VIDEO IN THE OTHER



SCENE SIXTY-EIGHT, EXT, WOODS, NIGHT

DARAGH SITS DOWN ON A GRASSY AREA BESIDE A LITTLE STREAM AND PUTS HIS BAG BESIDE HIM. HE IGNORES LIZZIE WHO SITS DOWN NEAR HIM. HE IS HITTING HIS KNEES AS IT THEY ARE DRUMS. SHE TRIES TO INIATE CONVERSATION.


LIZZIE

I think drums are great.


DARAGH

Um.


LIZZIE


The band’s good together.



DARAGH

Not bad.

LIZZIE

We have a chance.
DARAGH SHRUGS.


DARAGH

Anyway, I might be going away.


LIZZIE

You can’t do that until the Band final.


DARAGH SAYS NOTHING.

LIZZIE

Aw, c’mon Daragh. You’re not going to ruin it on us.


DARAGH

You can get another drummer. You’d be great at drums.


LIZZIE

It wouldn’t be the same. What do you want to do with leaving anyway? We still have school.



SOUND: SOMEONE OR SOMETHING BIG IN THE UNDERGROWTH


LIZZIE SITS CLOSER TO DARAGH.

LIZZIE

What’s that?


DARAGH

A bear.


LIZZIE

(CLUTCHING DARAGH) Oh my god! (THEN SHE LOOKS PUZZLED) Wait a minute. There aren’t any bears in this country.


DARAGH SMILES. LIZZIE IS HITTING HIM PLAYFULLY.

SCENE SIXTY-NINE: EXT. WOODS, NIGHT

KEN IS BRUSHING HIMSELF OFF AFTER HAVING FALLEN IN BUSHES. HE PICKS UP THE VIDEO CAMERA AND TORCH AND LOOKS AROUND, LISTENING, LIKE HE IS HUNTING.


SCENE SEVENTY: EXT. WOODS, NIGHT

LIZZIE STOPS HITTING HIM AND WRAPS HER ARMS AROUND HIM AND MIVES HER FACE SO AS TO KISS HIM. THEY KISS. SUDDENLY DARAGH PUSHES HER AWAY HARD.


DARAGH

You’re nothing but a slut.


LIZZIE HAS FALLEN TO THE GROUND AND STAYS THERE WITH A LOOK OF IMCOMPREHENSION. DARAGH RUNS FURTHER INTO THE WOODS.


SCENE SEVENTY-ONE: EXT.CEMETARY, NIGHT

DARAGH STUMBLES INTO THE CEMETARY. HE DOESN’T PLAN TO COME HERE. HE JUST WANTS TO BE ALONE. HE IS WALKING RANDOMLY WHEN HE SEES THE GRAVE OF HIS MOTHER MAY PENDER. HE SITS DOWN ON THE GRASS BESIDE IT AND OPENS HIS BAG. HE TALKS OUT A BOTTLE OF WHISKEY AND A LARGE BOTTLE OF PILLS. HE HOLDS THEM UP TO THE GRAVESTONE.

DARAGH


I held on to them, Mom. Morphine. Your only man.


HE TAKES A HANDFUL OF PILLS AND GULPS THEM DOWN WITH THE WHISKEY. HE THEN STARTS DRUMMING ON HIS KNEES AGAIN. PAN AROUND CEMETARY AS WE HEAR THE SOUND OF HIS DRUMMING. IT GRADUALLY GETS SLOWER.

CUT TO OVERHEAD SHOT OF CEMETARY SHOWING DARAGH PASSED OUT.


SCENE SEVENTY-TWO INT. DARAGH’S HOUSE, MORNING

MR. PENDER IS KNOCKING ON DARAGH’S DOOR TO WAKE HIM UP FOR SCHOOL. THERE IS NO ANSWER. HE GOES IN AND FNDS THE BED NOT SLEPT IN. MR. PENDER SEES MACK’S NOTEBOOK, PICKS IT UP AND STARTS TO GO THROUGH IT.

CU MACK’S NAME AND ADDRESS IN THE INSIDE



SCENE SEVENTY-THREE INT. SCHOOL DARAGH AND MACK’S CLASSROOM

MR. MANN IS GIVING OUT RESULTS. HE’S CALLING OUT NAMES AND THEY ARE GOING UP AND GETTING THEM.


MR. MANN

Daragh Pender!

HE LOOKS UP AND SEES THAT DARAGH IS NOT THERE.

MR. MANN

Pity! He would be very pleased with himself. He did very well.



SCENE SEVENTY-FOUR: EXT. SCHOOLYARD

MACK GOES OVER TO THE GIRLS. HE KNEW THEY WERE CONCERNED ABOUT DARAGH’S RESULTS BECAUSE IT AFFECTED THE BAND.

MACK

We got our results back and Daragh did okay.


GWEN

And how did you do?


MACK

Okay, I guess.


MARTHA

Where is Daragh?

LIZZIE

(BLUSHING) He told me he might be going away.

MACK

He didn’t tell me. Why would he do that? We have the band finals coming up?

EVERYONE LOOKS AT LIZZIE.

LIZZIE

I don’t know . He just said.


A GARDA WALKS THROUGH THE YARD AND INTO THE SCHOOL.
A FEW MNUTES LATER HE COMES OUT WITH MR. MANN WHO POINTS TO MACK. THE GARDA STARTS WALKING OVER TO MACK. MACK GOES OFF WITH HIM. THE GIRLS STARE AFTER THEM


MARTHA

It must be about Daragh.


GWEN

Then why would they want Mack?


MARTHA


He’s his best friend.

LIZZIE LOOKS GUILTY.

WIDE-SHOT SHOWING EVERYONE LOOKING FOR ANSWERS AS TO WHAT’S GOING ON. THEY TALK. BELL RINGS AND THEY GO BACK TO SCHOOL.

ANGLE ON LIZZIE

LIZZIE

There goes our change to be stars anyway.


SCENE SEVENTY-FOUR

MACK IS LED OUT OF THE SCHOOL BY THE GUARD.

SCENE SEVENTY-FIVE INT. SCHOOL, AFT.

IN THE SCHOOL HALL. STUDENTS AND TEACHERS ARE ASSEMBLED. MR. MANN WALKS UP TO THE PODIUM ON STAGE.

MR. MANN

There will be no school tomorrow.


STUDENTS CHEER AND MR. MANN TRIES TO CALM THEM DOWN.


MR. MANN


Before you get carried away, let me tell you why. We have lost one of our nicest students. Daragh Pender died last night. His funeral is tomorrow. We won’t



MARTHA BECOMES HYSTERICAL. GWEN AND LIZZIE TRY TO CALM HER. LIZZIE LOOKS HORRIFIED AND SHOCKED.


SCENE SEVENTY-SIX INT.GWEN’S KITCHEN, EVENING

TIFF IS GETTNG THE DINNER. GWEN IS TEXTING AND PHONING FRANTICALLY.


TIFF

Whoa there. We’re going to have dinner. Who are you trying to get so desperately?


GWEN

Mack. But he’s not answering.


TIFF

I don’t want you hanging around with that guy.


GWEN

What do you mean? He’s my friend.


TIFF

He’s your friend ?


GWEN

DEFENSIVELY) Yes, he is.


TIFF

I’ll tell you what he is. He’s a sexual pervert and a Satanist.He’s probably into drugs as well. He drove that Daragh fellow demented. It’s his fault he died.


GWEN

No, he’s not like that.


TIFF

You’re not to see him anymore.


SCENE SEVENTY-SEVEN: EXT.. POLICE STATION, EVENING

MACK IS STANDING OUTSIDE THE POLICE STATION WITH HIS MOBILE PHONE HE PUNCHES IN SOME NUMBERS.

CUT TO GWEN IN HER BEDROOM ANSWERING HER MOBILE PHONE. SHE S EXCITED BECAUSE IT IS MACK.




GWEN


Are you okay? I was so worried.



CUT BACK TO MACK

MACK

I’m fine. It was just a misunderstanding. They found my notebook in Daragh’s room. The one I had all the songs and poems and rituals and shit and they thought that’s why Daragh did it.

What? He killed himself. Didn’t you know?

Anyway, I’m going to leave town and I wanted to say good bye.


I’m going to stay with my mother’s cousin in Connemara. I’ll help him fish. My parents? No, they think I am a pervert too.

CUT TO GWEN. SHE IS CRYING.


GWEN

I want to see you before you go. Or I’ll go with you.

CUT TO MACK


MACK


Wait ‘til all this settles down. I screwed up enough people’s lives. I have to get away. I love you. I’ve got to go. Bye.

CU GWEN IN TEARS.


SCENE SEVENTY-EIGHT: EXT.MACK IS ON A BICYCLE COMING INTO COMING IN TO CONNEMARA, NIGHT

CUE MUSIC INSTRUMENTAL TRADITIONAL TUNE, PADDY IN LONDON

THE CAMERA IS FOLLOWING HIM FROM BEHIND IN A SLOW TWISTY PAN LIKE IN THE TWO BICYCLE SEQUENCES IN DONNIE DARKO. THERE IS A FULL MOON OVER THE HILLS.

SCENE SEVENTY-NINE: EXT. CEMETARY, MORNING

IT IS A BRIGHT SPRING DAY. CHERRY BLOSSOM PETALS ARE BLOWING IN THE WIND.

DARAGH IS BEING BURIED BESIDE HIS MOTHER. THERE IS A LOT OF TALK BECAUSE HIS FATHER DIDN’T GO TO THE FUNERAL. HIS BEST FRIEND MACK IS ALSO ABSENT.

THE PRIEST IS SAYING PRAYERS OVER THE CASKET LYING IN THE OPEN GRAVE.

THERE ARE GROUPS OF TEACHERS, STUDENTS AND PARENTS. GWEN IS AS USUAL WITH MARTHA AND LIZZIE. MARTHA IS CRYING.

CUT TO PAIR STANDING WHISPERING AT THE GRAVESIDE.

FOCUS ON GOSSIP 1 AND 2.


GOSSIP I


And imagine. His own father wouldn’t even come to the funeral.

GOSSIP 2

They say it was some kind of cult thing.


THEN FOCUS ON GOSSIP 3 AND 4.

GOSSIP 3

That other one was involved. Mack Grenier.


GOSSIP 4

What a waste!


CUT TO THE THREE GIRLFRIENDS.

MARTHA

What happened Gwen?



GWEN

I don’t know.


MARTHA

(ACCUSINGLY) Everybody blames Mack.



GWEN

(CRYING) It isn’t like that.


LIZZIE

(COMFORTING) I’m sure it isn’t.
But you were talking to Mack. What did he say happened?


GWEN

It seemed like there was some misunderstanding.


MARTHA


Misunderstanding? My God. Daragh’s dead.


SHE PUSHES GWEN.

FADE UP MUSIC , THE PRODIGY, BABY’S GOT A TEMPER.

GWEN PUSHES BACK AND THE TWO GIRLS END UP FIGHTING. THE TEACHERS HAVE TO BREAK THEM UP. LIZZIE GOES WITH GWEN AND MARTHA STANDS BY HERSELF.

PAN OVER TO TREE WHERE HER BROTHER KEN IS HIDING WHILE VIDEO TAPING THE FUNERAL.

CU MARTHA DISGUSTED. SHE LEAVES IN DESPAIR.

FADE MUSIC

SCENE EIGHTY EXT. BOAT OUT IN THE SEA

MACK IS WORKING ON HIS COUSIN’S BOAT. THE WAVES ARE BIG AND T HE WORK IS HARD BUT HE LIKES IT AND HE IS FOND OF HIS COUSIN WHO TAKES EVERYTHING AS IT COMES.


JOSEPH

Take that line there now.

HE PASSES A ROPE TO MACK.

JOSEPH

Now pull.

MACK PULLS THE LINE.


JOSEPH

Pull harder.


MACK PULLS HARD. THE WAVES ARE SPLASHING UP AND THE BOAT ISN ROCKING WILDLY. HE PULLS AGAIN WITH ALL HIS STRENGTH.


MACK


(SMILING) Is that hard enough for you?


JOSEPH

You’re doing fine.



SCENE EIGHTY-ONE: INT. GIRLS BATHROOM, THE SCHOOL, AFTERNOON

SOUND: GIRLS WALKING AROUND, TALKING, GIGGLING

ZOOM DOWN INSIDE ONE TOILET CUBICLE TO WHAT APPEARS TO BE A TOWEL ON THE FLOOR. ZOOM CLOSER TO REVEAL A NEW BORN BABY.



SCENE EIGHTY-TWO: INT GWEN’S HOUSE, AFT.

GWEN STUMBLES IN THE DOOR AND HEADS FOR THE KITCHEN. BLOOD IS DRIPPING FROM HER.

GWEN


(WEAKLY) Mom!

SHE COLLAPSES AND DOES NOT MOVE.

CU NOTE ON FRIDGE SAYING TIFF WOULD BE HOME LATE AND TO HEAT UP DINNER LEFT IN FRIDGE.



SCENE EIGHTY-THREE : INT. LIZZIE’S ROOM, NIGHT

SHE IS ON A MOBILE PHONE.

LIZZIE

Mack it’s Lizzie. I have Gwen’s phone.
Something terrible’s happened. (PAUSE)
Yes, again. I can’t really tell you on the phone. You have to come.


SCENE EIGHTY –FOUR : EXT. ROAD IN CONNEMARA,, MORNING

MACK ‘S HITCHHIKING. CAR STOPS AND HE GETS IN.


SCENE EIGHTY-FIVE: EXT. CEMETARY, AFTERNOON

MACK AND LIZZIE ARE STANDING BY A FRESH GRAVE. MACK IS HOLDING SOME FLOWERS AND IS CRYING. LIZZIE IS TRYING TO COMFORT HIM BUT IS UPSET HERSELF.

MACK

Why didn’t she tell me?



LIZZIE

Maybe she didn’t know herself. Anyway she didn’t tell me either. And she hasn’t spoken to Martha since Daragh’s funeral.



MACK

What kept me going out there on the sea was the fact that we’d be together someday.


LIZZIE

It was the same for her,
.

MACK PLACES THE FLOWERS SOFTLY ON THE GRAVE.


MACK

And the baby?



LIZZIE


It was a boy.


MACK

No, I mean, where is it? Did it live?



LIZZIE


Yeah, it lived. It’s at the hospital, I think.


SCENE EIGHTY-SIX: INT. PEDIATRICS DEPARTMENT OF HOSPITAL.

MACK IS SEATED IN A SMALL OFFICE WITH A NURSE.


NURSE

I’m not saying that you are not the father of that baby.
It’s just that it is a big job caring for a baby.

MACK

I’m working now.

NURSE


But who’ll mind the baby while you’re doing that.


MACK

I never thought of that. Can I see the baby?



NURSE

If you promise not to make a fuss when we keep the baby here. You will have to go through the courts I imagine if you want him.


MACK

I promise.


NURSE

A really nice couple has already arrived to adopt him. They would give him a nice home.


MACK

No way. He’s mine. I’ll find a way to make it work.


NURSE

You’re only fifteen. You have your whole life in front of you.


THE NURSE LEAVES MACK WAITING AND RETURNS WITH THE BABY, PLACING IT IN HIS ARMS. HE IS A BIT NERVOUS. THEN HE LOOKS DOWN AT THE LITTLE FACE AND THE BABY’S FINGER CURLS AROUND HIS OWN. HE LOOKS UP AND SEES KELLY AND KEVIN IN THE CORRIDOR.


MACK

You’re sure it is a nice couple.


NURSE

Positive. They are out there now.


MACK

I’m sure they’ll give him a good home.


HE KISSES THE BABY GENTLY ON THE FOREHEAD AND HANDS THE BABY BACK TO THE NURSE. HE WALKS OUT. KELLY AND KELLY DON’T SEE HIM
BUT HE WATCHES AT THEIR DELIGHT AS THEY ARE PRESENTED WITH THE BABY.



SCENE EIGHTY-SIX: EXT. HOSPITAL

CUE MUSIC: TBA

MACK WALKS OUT OF THE HOSPTAL, PAST GWEN’S HOUSE AND PAST HIS HOUSE AND BACK TO THE ROAD WHERE HE CAN HITCH-HIKE BACK TO CONNEMARA. HE IS A MAN NOW. MASTER OF HIS FATE.


CUE CREDITS


FADE MUSIC:

THE END